8/10 love the story overall, but would be better, since you mention Loki, to also mention which mythology you’re following, or if it is a mix (I know Loki belongs to Norse pantheon but you might also be doing a mix of many pantheons so) It would make the story all the more exciting to read, imo at least Also, if you specified if Eda Collins lives in current-style dimension (like 21st century technology) or more towards Middle Ages, because readers would know what they’re taking There are people who prefer Middle Ages stuff and people who instead love 21st century style or even futuristic one.
Other than that, I’d love to try out that story <3
The Guardian Demon (The Guardians of Nine Heavens, #3)
Johanne Green is a 15 years old girl who lives in Golden City, the capital of West Land, the place where everyone has a guardian angel to protect them and guide them towards purification.
Johanne’s mother is the mayoress of Golden City, Linda Black, who is bonded with the mightiest of all angels, the Archangel of Creation, Michael. Johanne’s father, Alex Green, is the headmaster of Angel Host Academy, the greatest institution for Angel Hosts to strengthen themselves and their guardian angels. Also, he is one of the mightiest Angel Hosts, being bonded with the second strongest celestial archangel, Gabriel.
However, Johanne, no matter such powerful parents, has no guardian angel and thus is deemed dangerous and ominous to fellow people in Golden City. This makes the young girl truly sad, as she has no real friends… But she hesitates to tell about her problems to her parents who are always so busy.
However, on her 15th birthday, the situation drastically changes - the mysterious black bracelet with skulls that Johanne was obliged to wear, gives out a signal (the skulls’ eyes turn red) and she is immediately sent by her parents to the East Land, to practice hidden arts of Spirit Bonding with two of her mysterious aunts (her mother’s younger sister and cousin), and get to the bottom of her long-forgotten past which is deeply connected with the Demon History…