Hi I like your summary, it’s the complete set, it has the irony in a story, the sarcasm, drama and love. Which many can relate to in a story like yours. It has sustenance, and it sounds fun. I give you a 9.6/10
TITLE: LEGEND OF D.A.R.K.E.S.S.
“It was the age of the apocalypse and the beginning of the end. Long ago there lived a boy who came to possess 5 powers. Afraid of what he had become, unknown to the mysteries of the world around him. He didn’t know what awaited him at the dawn of that time, whether he would become a devil or perhaps a God. But, sometimes there are mysteries that can’t wait for no one, and only in the shadows can he be sure to find the answers he was always searching for.”
“Much time has passed, perhaps centuries, years and lifetimes. Not much was known about that time in history, except what lay in the darkness, where no light was ever found piercing the world. True peril laid awake in the night, in the dreams and hearts of many.”
“Now Ray a young boy in search for his place in the world, as lost as the past, looking at every turn and only to come on empty. Being only 16 and soon to turn 17, he never thought that he would leave the home he knew, and only to be taken from the new home he barely knew. Taken by strangers and driven afraid, alone, in the night, in the dark. What hope could he find in the hands of others, in the darkness, in fear and perhaps even despair.”
I rewrote my summary from the one before, let’s hope this one is better than the last one I wrote.