The repetition is very unique and I think you use it very well. I’d definitely give it a read if I were scrolling. However, I don’t like the title very much. It’s just very bland in my opinion and doesn’t really stand out or flow very well. I’ll still check out your story, though, as the description really did catch my attention.
Yours Truly, Ramona
Maybe some people would call me suicidal.
That word confuses me, though.
When people think about being suicidal, they envision someone in pain-someone who’s sad.
But that’s what I don’t understand.
There is no sadness, and there is no pain. There is simply an absence of emotion altogether.
Of course, I know I’m sad and I know I’m in pain. But there’s a difference between knowing sadness and feeling sadness. I’ve come to a point where I can’t feel it anymore.
And I’m drowning in the numbness, slowly but surely.