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#6235

Fantasy story, it’s called Airborn. Are you writing at all?


#6236

Oooh, is that a type of asmr?


#6237

Just woke up so not atm. Got a lot of editing done yesterday though. :>
Patched up a pretty big plothole in my main story.


#6238

That’s nice! I need to catch up on editing. It’s always a satisfying feeling.


#6239

Never really had trouble sleeping myself, except when my roommates being scummy tbh.


#6240

I’m not sure? they run in a similar vein.


#6241

Interesting, I’ll try it out! Thanks!


#6242

@Beautifully-mixed
ABBY! I’m ready! Go on, destroy my book! I am brave!
cowers in his bomb shelter
Name: Awake (the Herokiller Chronicles #1)
Chapters: 1 (currently)
Genre: fantasy
Ongoing.
I can’t give the link (thank you, wattpad mobile)
Yeah, chapter by chapter review.


#6243

Lucky duck :joy:


#6244

Only halfway :'D
That roommate I mentioned is horrible, honestly. People get shocked when I tell people about some of what she’s been up to.


#6245

:open_mouth:


#6246

I feel like I some times end up with quotations otta nowhere? Anyone else feels like that’s a thing?


#6247

oo, :alien: tell me more? I’m terribly nosy.


#6248

if you put > in front or highlight and add quote or [quote][/quote] them it adds a quote :nerd_face:


#6249

Honestly I’m not sure what it is. Some times just post a comment, but suddenly I’ve managed to quote someone other then the person I’m replying to??


#6250

Hello, just asking for update on review?


#6251

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#6252

I will say this only once. For I get this alot. I do close to 15 reviews a week on top of chapter by chapter. And chapter by chapter is close if not more then 15 week. I am busy with my life as well. So please be patient. If you can not be then maybe find someone who can do it faster. But I update daily. Next week I will have a new list up with books your book will probably be on there. Just depends


#6253

hello people and the wonderful abbbbyyy :nerd_face:

oh i need a hug


#6254

hug marshmallow what going on