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#143

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.


#144

I’m always looking for feedback. I’d appreciate your comments. Thanks for doing this.

Name: A Traitor’s Tale
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters: 4
Status: Ongoing
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163414136-a-traitor’s-tale


#145

I’d love to get a bit of feedback. Thanks for offering to do this. Are you ok with fanfic?

Name: Above All Shadows
Genre: Fanfiction (Marvel Cinematic Universe)
Chapters: 3
Status: Ongoing
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/166950143-above-all-shadows


#146

Hello, feel free to be as harsh as you want. This is a 500 word short story for a contest and would like some feedback. :slight_smile:

Form:

Name Of Story: The First Dance

Genre: Short Story / Romance

Chapters: 1

Ongoing /completed: Complete

Link to story: https://my.w.tt/ElTWBP0PKR


#147

Ok I look forward to your input.

Title: FoodNotes

Genre: Romance/Mystery

Chapters: 2

Ongoing/completed: Ongoing

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164826379-foodnotes


#148

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.


#149

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.:grin:


#150

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.:sunglasses:


#151

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.:grinning:


#152

TITLE: corduroy sweater
GENRE: teen fiction / young adult
CHAPTERS: four
STATUS: on-going
LINK: [won’t let me link sorry]

feel free to be harsh, i look forward to your feedback :^) i personally think it’s a bit cliche and fast-moving, but i’d like to hear what you think


#153

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.


#154

thank you very much!


#155

you are welcome


#157

Hello. I was wondering if you’d give my story a try.

Name Of Story: Youth Unsupervised

Genre: Romance

Chapters: 31

Ongoing /completed: Completed

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/122431508-youth-unsupervised

Thanks very much in advance.


#158

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.


#159

Thanks very much.


#160

you’re welcome


#161

Here it goes.

The Title: RED PARALLEL
Genre: General Fiction / Urban Fiction
Chapters: 86
Completed
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166285773-red-parallel
Cover:

If you ever find time to take a look, I already appreciate.


#162

acceptedharsh
When I am done with your story I will put here how many chapters I read and my thoughts.


Plese look at post 26 to see my list of stories I am woking on. I update Daily and try to read Daily. It will take me some time but your story shall get read


#163

Thank you very much!