Hell's Critiques Season Four (Always Open , Honesty 50% 50% Friendship)

feedback-offered
help
friends

#1


Space Space Space Hello
My name is Abby and I’m looking for stories that can blow my socks off. Think you could be one of them? Well, keep reading…
Space
What you should know
Space
This thread is open to ALL stories. Yes, that means all stories. When I accept your story, I will let you know. After I have read your story, I will come back here and tag you in your review. You can enter as many stories as you would like. I don’t have a timeline as I have a child, so I can usually only read at night. When your review is done, I will tell you what chapter I stopped at and why. Remember these are my thoughts. I am not trying to be mean, but I am brutal. I will hold nothing back, so if you can’t take that heat and want someone to sugarcoat it for you, then get out of my kitchen! On the other hand, if you feel that your story will win my heart over or you want real critiques, then feel free to follow the form below.
I’m not a normal critic that just reviews your story and then takes no interest in you. As a critic, I want you to succeed. I want your story to flourish. I want stories like yours to be seen. So, I’m harsh to show you your weaknesses. That way, you can fix them and your story can soar. I do this because I care about you. I want you to keep writing, but most importantly I want you to keep improving.
Love,

Space


Additional: @ImperialARG : Vice President of thread @TheMCOfficial : Executive Admin and @frjohnson : Creative Director
Space
Space Space Space Space The form
Space
Please note that I WILL NOT ACCEPT A REQUEST WITHOUT A FORM.

Name of Story:
Genre:
Chapters:
Ongoing/completed:
Link to story:
please make sure you tag me when you request so I can see it for sure
Space Space Final words
Amazing cover made by @frjohnson
new banners made by @LauraAnneLee


My rant about how people give feedback.
#2


~My tag List
@TheMCOfficial
@ImperialARG
@RichardWho
@AverySummers
@Misterrabbit
@frjohnson
@ChangingFace
@Sashetha
@miramallows
@Thisisroy
@CLSwritings
@laynejodi
@CJoslyn
@LtheSlytherPuff
@Bings2004
@juniormint94
@CharlesSmith9
@BaxterWilhelm
@salemkeating
@Shadow_wonder
@ofbooksandbooknerds
@TheImperfectLife
@JamesAcker
@FireAlwaysReturns
@Amyuqi
@sooppastar
@articen
@LizLaneWrites
@JosefinaFAAD
@Bemythyst
@FantasybkLover
@SammyWilkonson
@AquarianEmpire
@SurroundMe
@AQ_HaeR
@staymelanated
if you want to be added to this list just ask. If you decide you no longer want on this list just let me know.


#3


On The Chopping Block



This world we live in
Poetry
Lancaster and Maxwell



Dirty Paws
The devil’s Lamb
Legends of Darkness



Songs of a broken arrow
The clan family
Under the lily pad



The cursed book
Bat club
The world-soul
This will be updated once a week or when there is ni more books on the list . Please do not bug me or ask me when I will be done with your review. I have a life outside of Wattpad when I get to it you will know for I tag you in your review


#4

Waiting list


The weight of stars
Your Friday night
The Lost and the Fallen
The region of Athena
Pure hearted
Toestand
Firefly
Lost Girl
Beyond the Veil
I was beautiful once
The Dark Void
The evil
Hiraeth:legend of the lymorem
The only wish
Vasikia link
Descent into madness
San Moira:City of faith
Ardt Liliana
The last stop
The wandmaker’s granddaughter
The Trinity trial
Awkward
Georgy Girl Gone Wild
Twin hearts
Stone of Kairos
Adventures in Cripple Creek
Guven
The Rome project
Death by Disney
Heartbreaker for hire
The lines rewrite
The dreamer in the woods
Drop
A prince errand
Antihero
Drunken dialing
Lamb amongst wolves
Lucas
Hallowed roots
A solar and dark
We were blue
Fly High
dark woods
The snakes
Renegades
Confessions of an Angel
Godmother fairy
The transcendent vindiciators
We stood here in 1993
The dark
the dance of Marquise
The elemental University
The collided world
Little black bird
Thanatos hotline
Until then, Walter Edmund
Paladin the path begins
The welders
A city of War
Minecraft the crust of the Mt
Cursed Gardens
Part-time lovers
Shadows in the trees
Chroma
And then there were stars
void bound
Whatever souls are made of
Marlo’s battles
All I see
The princess entourage
Wip
swansons Torment
The factory girl
Wolf Among Us
Home for the Holidays
Ephosis
Cursebreaker
Lacunae
Noodle Boy
Slumber
Just Survive
Neema
angels
Ley Lines
Ella: Through sheer curtains
Summer 010
Alpha Love
Sweet Journey Gossip
Undying Love
Untitled
Darkening Seduction
The Young and The Broke
Whiff
Bay City Runaway
When Life Gives You Lemons
Club Cupid
Angel of the Dead: A Nico di Angelo fanfiction
Be Alright
Lost Without You
The Minerva Prophecy
The next First
Fly - a yuzuru hanyu
Diamonds & Rubies
Rain
Dark tears - a slave’s perspective
Dangerous
Legacy Ascension
Forgotten
Love Me Again
Beauty is Terror
A City of Shadows
Living life to the fullest
The Pearl
The Princess of Egypt
Wolf Queen (The Fate of Berrilium),
Heartbeat
Is magic a superpower??
Teenage, Troubled and Telekinetic
Woebegone
Nine Years of Elliot
The World Changer.
Project Ultron
The World Of Eirene
The Four Chimes
this list will be updated, as the request come in. If you are not on This list, please feel free to let me know and I will add your story. do not bug me or ask me when I will be done with your review. I have a life outside of Wattpad when I get to it you will know for I tag you in your review


#5

First


#6

Welcome


#7

Third lol


#8

fourth!


#9

Abby can I be added to the tag list :sparkles:


#10

sksskksksksks


#11

I didn’t know you weren’t on it


#12

abby can you add me on the tag list??


#13

JOJO!!!


#14

Adding now


#15

Hello! Introductions were left amidst in the previous discussion. I’m Meenal. Nice to meet you all.


#16

THANK YOU ABBY!!


#17

omg, your waiting list is huge xD


#18

I’M JAZ…ia ssume you already knew that…hehehe 18 this year!!


#19

welcome


#20

agrree!