Hell's Critiques Season Four (Always Open , Honesty 50% 50% Friendship)

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#3842

… I f you have t o make a P A C T one of you is T H I N K I N G ABOUT IT


#3843

The actual chapters are supposed to be twice as long as the prologue as the prologue was 1,500 words and the chapters are supposes to be 3,000-4,000 words. So in that sense it is a short prologue. But I understand your opinion and glad you liked the story.


#3844

I mean it would be poetic and I’m here for it, I just hope we both have long lives ahead of us.


#3845

Those are good


#3846

maybe, you’re uh, maybe you’re right…


#3847

yup


#3848

RUN or… DON’T? I CAN’T TELL


#3849

I live oreo abd choloate chip


#3850

eyes gleam in the shadows


#3851

according to me oreos are not cookies


#3852

Why not?


#3853

because oreo=love


#3854

oh…dear. oh…dear


#3855

Omg oreo is life


#3856

i know right
hows your little one


#3857

He is good it is nap time so he is sleeping


#3858

awwww
i wanna become a toddler and have nap time


#3859

Right it would be great


#3860

I have some time to talk


#3861

Today’s free Friday