Honest Feedback (For Honest Feedback) {OPEN}



For those that are interested, I’m posting to offer my own critiquing services. I’m far from a published author and every critique I give is only my own thoughts, but it is my honest thoughts. I do my best to mention things I liked and enjoyed as well as errors or other judgements, and be prepared for a lot of comments.

In return, I only ask that you do the same for me! Although I promise one chapter and will look at more if I’m curious, I will at least match however many chapters you do in return. So, if you look through two or three or more of mine, I will do the same! Otherwise, I’ll look at whatever I am interested or have time for.

My own story (Foxtrot, a YA Fantasy) can be found here: https://www.wattpad.com/652518849-foxtrot-chapter-1

And although my favorite is Fantasy (and most sub-categories thereof), I’m open to any genre. I will point out any grammar or spelling issues I find unless you ask me not to, but the focus is more on the characters and storytelling. If you have some specific area you’d like me to focus on or questions about something specific (like first impressions or something you’re particularly concerned about), let me know! Otherwise, everything is game :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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Hi, I’ll have a look at your story now and comment as I see fit.

If you want to do one of mine ( and you don’t have to) Matt’s Divorce is my ongoing one with the least love so far. So any little helps.

I want to finish it this month all going well. It’s a mash-up of genres. ( in other words -I haven’t a clue!!)


Sure thing! As soon as I see that go through, I’ll check out Matt’s Divorce!


I’d always love another opinion on my work!

My book is called Silver Glass and it’s a ya paranormal story.
Here’s the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163764668-silver-glass-but-he’s-going-to-die-soon

Thanks for your thoughts!


Please let me know if you are interested in exchange for one of my two stories:

  1. A completed fantasy story called Crimson Qi
    Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/149542577-crimson-qi


  1. Space opera I just started posting, Stellar Cruises
    Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164987325-stellar-cruises

Thank you in advance for your consideration


Ooh I’d be interested! I’ll try to get to it as soon as I can after you reply!

Title: What the Morning Brings
Author: @infIorescent
Genre: YA Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166826871-what-the-morning-brings-nanowrimo2018


Sure thing! I can do either one - the fantasy interests me more just because it’s a preference, but I’m willing to look at whichever one you think would be most helpful!

Let me know and as soon as I see you’ve taken a look at mine, I’ll go through yours!


YA Fantasy! Awesome~ Will put that in my queue and get to it shortly!


I reviewed the first two chapters! I hope you find it useful!


This is greatly appreciated Remnantation. I would love someone to look over my prologue for My Star Wars book. Any help would be very, VERY much appreciated. Thx!
Title: Star Wars - Knights of The Old Republic - Betrayal
Chapter Number: Prologue
Author: Me @ElizaErson
Genre: Sci-Fi / Fan-Fic
Short Summary: A Jedi framed for a crime he did not commit.


You’re in luck, I’m a fantasy author! XD

Story Link:

You can start anywhere you want. It either be Humans and Monsters, Monsters only, Humans only, or all. Confused? You’ll see!


Hey there,
I’ve just finished the first two chapters of my shortstory and would like to reeive some feedback.

Here are the chapters:

In exchange I gladly give you some feedback on your story.

Cheers :slight_smile:


Thank you, and I am great believer in only reading what appeals the most. :slight_smile: the comments incoming!


Thank you so much I did.

I wasn’t expecting so much detail but when you update I’ll do more on yours.


No problem! Hope it’s helpful!


Hi! I’d love to exchange feedback, if my story interests you. It’s a dark/high fantasy called Nightfire and I’d really love some honest thoughts on it.


Thank you for your time!


I did a few but I’ll probably end up looking at more when I have the time! I find Silver Glass interesting so far!


Although I’ve watched the movies and played a few games, I don’t think I’ve ever read fanfiction for Star Wars, so that’ll be interesting!

I’ll put you on my queue and get to it as soon as I see you’ve gotten to mine!


Interesting! I’ll put you on my queue and get to you as soon as I see you’ve gotten to mine!


Sounds great! I’ll put you on the queue and get to them as soon as I see you’ve gotten to mine!