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#21

Title of Book: His Eternal Muse
Genre: Teen Fiction
Summary: Katrina Jones is a 16 years old high school teenager with excellent grades and balanced lifestyle. Everyone including herself thought that she has a perfect life until things started to change after her 17th birthday. She discovers the dark truth of her life but what she isn't prepared for is for her former best friend, now an enemy, Shawn Harrison to return to her life after a huge gap of 5 years.
Will Katrina be able to accept the truth about her life? More importantly, how does she going to deal with Shawn?
Link: https://my.w.tt/G5xDGG7c0U
I would like to receive my feedback in story comments :slight_smile:
Thank youuu so much for doing this!


#22

Want to join in on an adventure? Have a look at my story:)

Title: Elysia: The Wasteworld

Genre: Adventure/Action/Dystopian

Summary: The world is in catastrophe. The Great War has devastated the globe. All governments have lost their power and the systems that hold everything together are falling apart at the seams. And then there is Elysia–the last standing paradise on Earth. However, it is in a secluded place, out of reach of anyone who is ineligible of entering the city. Would Erik, a reckless blond boy with a Cadillac and Jessica, who grew up to be a ruthless, independent woman, be able to team up and reach Elysia in search of a new life and everlasting bliss?

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/695609957-elysia-the-wasteworld-the-car-thief

Feedback: In the comments on my story

Feel free to reject me if you don’t want to read it!


#23

Comments are up! Loved it!
Just a reminder I love writing and talking to other writers and I would really appreciate it if you checked out my new book! https://www.wattpad.com/story/181082375-on-my-own


#24
  • Title of Book: Lost and Found
  • Genre: Fanfiction (Camp Rock - Disney Movie)
  • Summary:Nate Gray was exhausted from the drama in his life. Caitlyn Gellar was hurt, and a little bit broken.

Nate was after having another break up with his on-again-off-again girlfriend, Dana. Following an extensive world tour with Connect 3, he needed some time away from the spotlight to re-evaluate his priorities.
Caitlyn was humiliated and hurt from the betrayal of her long-term boyfriend Ben. After injuring her ankle, it leaves her with little job prospects she is forced to seriously reconsider where her life is going.

Where do they both end up for the summer?
Camp Rock.
A summer of fixing and finding themselves.
A season of familiar faces and bitter enemy lines.
A story of love and loss.
This is Camp Rock.
Seven years later.


#25
  • Title of Book: Schrodinger’s Child
  • Genre: Memoir
  • Summary: Meri, even since she was a child, has always felt invisible. Purely, completely, undeniably invisible. When her mother, tormented by the demons of substance abuse and mental illness, physically abused her siblings in her place? Invisible. When the other children at school taunted her and avoided her like the plague? Invisible. And later when she struggled with depression, forcing herself daily to go through the motions, even though she couldn’t find a single reason why she should? Invisible. All her life it has appeared that she is the only one who can see herself drowning. Maybe, she thinks, it’s not that they don’t see: it’s that they don’t care.

The concept of Schrodinger’s cat has always resonated with her. Shove a cat into a box, hide it away from prying eyes, and suddenly it is both alive and dead at the same time. It’s there and not there, healthy and unhealthy, real and unreal, as long as it remains unobserved. This is what Erwin Schrodinger himself would have called an observer’s paradox. It’s so ridiculous, he argued, that it simply cannot be true. Meri knows better. She can’t speak for Schrodinger’s cat, but she has always felt that she is Schrodinger’s child. Living but lifeless, mature but childlike, an unobserved observer, she is trapped between two worlds that no person should ever have to inhabit at once. Adulthood is lurking just around the corner for her, but even so, she cannot help but wonder; if there is no clear fate for Schrodinger’s cat, then what-if anything-will happen to her?


#26

VERY excited about this!


#27

Title: Wandering Hearts
Genre: Chicklit
Summary:
“And In Her Smile, I See Something More Beautiful Than All The Stars.”

Paisley Teller loses her mom to cancer. She ends up moving to a new state, leaving all her friends behind. She has to make a new life with her abusive Aunt and Uncle along with selfish, spoiled, and annoying kids. She ends up falling for a boy every girl wishes they could have.

Join Paisley on her long journey with annoying cousins, new friends, cute boys, laughter, and sleepless nights.*

Gist of Summary: Paisley Teller loses her mother to cancer, and feels like she’s lost all hope; her aunt and uncle have to take her on as part of the family. Paisley feeling so lost and unwelcomed finds three boys who turn her world around and welcome her home.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/143051710-wandering-hearts-ongoing

Story comment please! :katherinearlene::katherinearlene:


#28

Hi! I was able to give feedback on the first 2 chapters of your story. (Normally I would read more, but your chapters were a decent length, hope you don’t mind.)

Thanks again! Just a reminder I love writing and talking to other writers and I would really appreciate it if you checked out my new book! https://www.wattpad.com/story/181082375-on-my-own


#29

Comments are up! Loved it!
Just a reminder I love writing and talking to other writers and I would really appreciate it if you checked out my new book! https://www.wattpad.com/story/181082375-on-my-own


#30

PM’d you!

Thanks!! Loved it!


#31

Thank you for checking out my story ^^! And sure, I’ll give yours a try too XD.


#32

Thank youuuu so much for the lovely feedback! I appreciate it a lot :heart:
I will check out your book!!


#33

Just read the first 3 chapters! Really enjoyed it!


#34

Thanks means so much! I added your story to a read later list and will get to it on my free time most likely on my bus ride to college tomorrow morning!


#35

Comments up on your chapters! Great story so far!


#36

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!


#37

Title of Book: Valiant

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Coming of Age

Summary:

Unexplored vales. Dangerous beasts.

Relics of an ancient society. Untold riches to be discovered.

Glory. Fame. Fortune.

The call of adventure beckons kindred souls from around the world to the dangerous nation of Middangeard, bastion of mankind.
A lawless country where the weak crumble and the strong flourish, where the gap between good and evil is slight - only the brave, or foolish, would consider living in this unforgiving land.
The select few that find themselves captivated by the song of discovery are called…

The Valiant!

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/177927582-valiant

Where you would like to receive your feedback (EX. Comments here, Story comments, PM): Erm. Whatever is easiest, to be honest. Comments here?

Any other information you find important for me to know!: Have fun!


#38

Comments are up! Really unique! Great writing!


#39

Thank you so much!


#40

I read and left comments on the first 5 chapters of your story! I’m really enjoying it so far. I love how much I can relate to the narrator. Great job!
Just a reminder I love writing and talking to other writers and I would really appreciate it if you checked out my new book! https://www.wattpad.com/story/181082375-on-my-own