I’ve been thinking of dumping my prologue. Problem is im worried the first paragraph in chapter 1 isn’t nearly as interesting as the one in my prologue. Im hoping we could scratch is others back. Rate the first paragraph of the first chapter of the person before you from one to ten and give us a reason why you gave it that score.
Kariah-Belle Nadirè stood next to her best friend, Akiio, as the two young women put on their graves and gauntlets, preparing for the trail ahead. Her squad has been on the military aircraft for over a day now, and were soon to be upon their destination.