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#21

on it


#22

Only one chapter for this one. But, I’ll read your first :slight_smile:


#23

okay, thanks!


#24

Complete


#25

complete!


#26

Book title/chapter: Stolen By Him
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/118760169-stolen-by-him

thanks for doing this!


#27

Ok. I’ll be right on it once you complete the payment :slight_smile:


#28

done (:


#29

awesome!


#30

Complete! Awesome book


#31

thank you! i really liked yours too. also thank you for adding it to your reading list :DD


#32

Book title/chapter: Windblown
Link: Windblown (poetry)
Payment complete?: If you accept, I will get on the payment right away!
Thank you for offering this service :cherry_blossom:


#33

Book: The Human and the Demon (Title subject to change)
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166939533-the-human-and-the-demon-deltarune-story

Note: It is a fanfiction based off Deltarune, but contains OC’s, new locations and a new storyline. It only borrows certain character names/designs

Could you critique the first proper chapter? Keep in mind it’s split in two

Will complete payment when i have time :slight_smile:


#34

Book title/chapter: Secretly Filmed/Intro

Link: It’s not working

Payment complete?: I will once I get your acceptance.


#35

Accepted!


#36

Accepted


#37

yep. accepted


#38

I took the liberty of reading 3


#39

Book title/chapter: The Autumn Tree, Chapter 1
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/175245919-the-autumn-tree
Payment complete?: Y


#40

Book title/chapter: When Life Gives You Lemons, Chapter 15
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/135412674-when-life-gives-you-lemons
Payment complete?: Working on it now!