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#41

I’ll start on it first thing tomorrow. :slight_smile:


#42

First thing tomorrow, I’ll start my critique


#43

complete


#44

complete!


#45

Finished!


#46

Thanks for the critique :slight_smile:


#47

Thank you! Your advice about using usernames is great and i definitely will use that. :slightly_smiling_face: I will complete the rest of the payment now.


#48

complete


#49

complete!


#50

Form
Book title/chapter: Breaking Black - Chapter One
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163219862-breaking-black
Payment complete?: Y/N Yes


#51

accepted


#52

complete. :slight_smile:


#53

SUNDAY NEW CHAPTER MORE CRITIQUE/FEEDBACK OFFERED, BUMP


#54

BUMP


#55

Form
Book title: Death City - Chapter 4
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/72594165-death-city

Can you critique chapter four? Thanks a lot. I’m currently working on payment.


#56

accepted


#57

complete! Thanks for the extra read of my story :slight_smile:


#58

No problem I enjoyed it! And mine was a longer chapter so I wanted to be fair lol.


#59

Form :
Book title/chapter: In love with another wolves mate
Could you please read my first chapter

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/153423779-in-love-with-another-wolves-mate

Payment complete?: Yes I have done as requested


#60

accepted :slight_smile: