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#61

complete


#62

Sorry for the delay I was very busy the last few days, thank you so much!


#63

Thanks!


#64

Book title/chapter: NinRai chapter 1-2
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/175012986-ninrai-excerpt-smashwords
Payment complete?: Y (Two chapters :wink: )


#65

Thanks!

author: @besmabesma3

*book title:*Therapy sessions of an almost functioning human Part 1 - SESSION 4

genre: YA- humor

Payment will be done after you accept

link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173039606-therapy-sessions-of-an-almost-functioning-human

SUMMARY In which this girl tries to make her way through life while trying not to take the absurdity of existence too seriously.

"-I had a horribly busy day converting oxygen into carbon dioxide.

-Fair enough."

Here’s a little quote

I waved at her and made my way down the stairs and through the glass door of the building. I closed it, feeling the cold handle on my fingers and the crispy winter air engulf me in a warm embrace.
What a lovely day not to commit suicide, I thought to myself before heading to my house
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#66

accepte :slight_smile:


#67

accepted. starting now


#68

Title : WAITINGFORYOU

Genre : Poetry/Romance/short story

Blurb: A short story on desperation of love written in a poetic form, where a young girl falls for a elder boy who changes her to be something she never wanted to be.

21 poems to show you the journey of 365 days in the life of the young girl.

Inspired by true events.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/175361792-w-a-i-t-i-n-g-f-o-r-y-o-u

Payment : done!

Thank you.


#69

complete. As an introduction to a poetry story, I think that was a strong one to start with. :slight_smile:


#70

Done


#71

complete!


#72

hiii
book title: Behind The Scenes
chapter: 1
link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/154830638-behind-the-scenes
payment complete: Yes


#73

hello!


#74

I did leave a few comments. Not expecting payment. Did it for fun.


#75

Done!


#76

Thank you very much then. :slight_smile:
That’s very sweet of you.


#77

176960603-256-k703789
Status: Ongoing
Tags: Violence, Abuse, Mature, Erotic, Fanfic, Non-Canon, Revenge


#78

Haha, I saw. Thank you so much, you’re so sweet. But accepted and I’ll get right on your critique


#79

complete!


#80

Completed