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#201

Thank you.


#202

I will be happy to check out your story :slight_smile:


#203

This is greatly appreciated BubbleNikki. I would love someone to look over my prologue for My Star Wars book. Any help would be very, VERY much appreciated. Thx!
Title: Star Wars - Knights of The Old Republic - Betrayal
Chapter Number: Prologue
Author: Me @ElizaErson
Genre: Sci-Fi / Fan-Fic
Short Summary: A Jedi framed for a crime he did not commit.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/167421269-star-wars-knights-of-the-old-republic-betrayal?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks


#204

Title: Nightingale
Author: eanuit
Genre: Historical fiction
Short Summary: John Kinsley, a survivor of the Crimean War, recalls his conversation with a nurse on New Year’s Eve. A conversation which changed his perspective forever…
Link: please excuse that for now and search for the story


#205

Hi, may I request a critique for my work? Thanks!

Name Of Story: Tales of The Demi Human

Author : Icehall/Lee-sipemimpi

Summary : Follow the journey of Kyran, a fallen human as he paves his way to find his purpose and reclaim his destiny. He came from Earth to Lumia, a vast world offering anything beyond one’s imagination, from demon races and sacred beasts, sword and magic and…wait, are you serious, martial art cultivators and high-tech mecha? Adventure, companion and love is awaiting!

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/167450457-tales-of-the-demi-human

Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Romance/Action


#206

I’ll read it and get back to you!


#207

Thanks, I’ll read as much as I can of yours!


#208

I’ll read as much as I can and let you know :slight_smile:


#209

Got it, I’ll get back to you


#210

I’ll read as much as I can and get back to you :smiley:


#211

Author/Name: edanmorez
Short Summary:
An LGBT novel.

THE ROAR OF THE CHEERING CROWD.

Val Wash is one her school’s best soccer players.
She’s charming, smooth talking and can get out of trouble with ease.
At least that’s how it was in the past,
but now her heart’s affection refuses to release its target,
her straight best friend.

THE ENCHANTING SUMMON OF THE DESIRED.

Naomi Johnson has always loved men.
Lately, certain passions have risen
that muddle her love for her boyfriend
and lead her down a path
she has never tread.

IT’S THEIR FINAL YEAR AND THEIR FRIENDSHIP GROWS UNSTABLE.

What will happen when the girls
appeal to their innermost wishes?
Can their friendship last through
the chaos that accompanies their senior year?
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164623440-10-things-i-hate-about-her
Genre: teen fic

Have a nice day :slight_smile:


#212

I’ll read as much as I can and get back to you!


#213

Thanks so much!


#214

Thank you. I really appreciate it. Have a good day!


#215

Hello, I’d like to put my book for your consideration to review as well :smiley:

Name of Book: Irresistibly Innocent Love

Author/Name: xonsethereal

Short Summary: When arrogant playboy high school student Aiden meets Annabeth, a mysterious studious but outgoing and popular girl in a South Korean high school, he discovers a side of himself that he never realised existed in him. However, as soon as he starts putting the idea of having a serious relationship in his mind, he discovers a horrifying truth: Annabeth had never thought about romance before, much less dating a boy, except for her beloved Jungkook from famous boy band BTS. How will Aiden plant the seeds of romance in the mind of Annabeth, fight back against his original chaotic side while exploring his newfound side, and cope with the different difficult circumstances that reality is putting forward, threatening to almost certainly destroy any chance of them having a relationship in the first place? And how much of himself is he willing to sacrifice in that process?

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/135167681-irresistibly-innocent-love

Genre: Romance

Thanks in advance! Heading on to take a look at your book rn as well :stuck_out_tongue:


#216

You are so sweet! I’ll put it on my to-do list to read your book. :relaxed:
Name of Book: The Adventures of Beatrice Bloom

Author/Name: Shannrah Comeelo/Rioxxx1

Short Summary: Beatrice Bloom is the only lost girl on Neverland, the only person who can save Peter Pan, and she is the only lost child of Neverland that can’t fly. Her happy thoughts aren’t that happy, and her only friend is a pixie with no pixie dust. Now, how is she supposed to save Peter and Tinker Bell?

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166883220-the-adventures-of-beatrice-bloom

Genre: Young Adult Adventure. (Written in the same style as The Magician’s Nephew by C. S. Lewis)

The full chapter is complete, and won’t be until tomorrow night, but enough is up that it ends nicely until I add the rest.

Thank you!


#217

Name of Book: The Great Game
Author: Sammurphy3
Short Summary: 3 college students and a college professor are pulled into the world of the United States Army. They must help track down Professor Richard Brooks, who claims to have a few lines of complex computer code. He wants to sell it to the highest bidder.
Link to book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/111157925-the-great-game
Genre: Historical Fiction


#218

Title: Aden’s Nari
Author: @Bings2004
Summary: Ovanari, Known as Nari, Has returned to his hometown after 4 years at a Preparatory Academy. He returns to Welcoming arms and Apologies instead of fists and horrible insults.

Aiden was once a sweet little boy who changed his attitude to bad boyish when he became popular, and in the process, he destroyed his and Nari’s friendship.

What happens when the two reunite?
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/162584390-aiden's-nari
Genre: Romance (Teen- LGBT)


#219

Name of Book: Perfect Facades
Author: @strawberrylove3
Short Summary: Alison Delory only has one year of college left and all she wants is to finish the year with the spotless academic record she’s maintained her entire life, she knows what will happen if she doesn’t and she’s not particularly keen about repeating the dark days of highschool. The last thing she could deal with right now with a romance, especially one with an alluring redheaded woman who she couldn’t tear her eyes away from.

Valerie Arlin is going through life on a solo journey. Love and loss have always come hand in hand for her and she’d rather not put herself through that kind of torment again. But there’s nothing she can do to stop herself from drifting towards the young brunette she meets, there’s something too magnetic about the way she smiles.

What will happen to these two as they navigate life in the busy city of Boston? Will they mend the holes in each other’s souls and sail off into the sunset together? Or will they tear each other apart and leave the world with two more shattered hearts?

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/165108866-perfect-facades
Genre: Romance (LGBTQ+)

This is my first story but I would love some honest feedback! :slight_smile:


#220

ok so i just complety re did my books whole discription you should check it out bubblenikki