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#221

Hey! I feel bad for asking since this is so long already, but it’s worth a shot, I guess :slight_smile:

Name of Book: Rigel
Author/Name: Serabill
Short Summary: An ex-slave turned pirate blackmails a navy official to usurp the corrupt Crown, then some form of affection stems from a broken nose and a pool of retch between two captains on opposite ends of the law
Link to Book:https://www.wattpad.com/story/166498477-rigel
Genre: Romance/mystery

(Went to check and noticed that I’ve actually read a couple of your chapters! Really enjoyed your writing, although I’m not really into teen romance)


#222

Thanks, I’ll read yours and get back to you!


#223

Ty! I’ll read yours and let you know :slight_smile:


#224

I’ll read as much as I can and get back to you!


#225

Accepted, I’ll let you know :slight_smile:


#226

I’ll read as much as I can and let you know!


#227

will do!


#228

I’ll read what I can and let you know!


#229

I have been extremely busy lately, so I apologize if I haven’t gotten to your story yet. I will definitely get to it, just please be patient. Again, sorry for taking a while.


#230

lol being busy is hard but go check out my book whenever you want


#231

Alright! I have FINALLY finished reviewing everyone’s stories, I sent a PM when I finished, if you have any questions, just ask me! SO SO SO sorry for taking forever. Thanks for letting me read so many amazing stories!


#232

Book Name: Invisible Wounds
Author: Corrina
Short Summary:
After Alycia’s successful suicide attempt, her girlfriend, Malia, was left with sorrow and traumatic flashbacks that affected her. It hurt Malia to the point where she almost lost herself in the process. But with a year of self love and reflection, Malia was able to recover.

By the time she rose to the surface, she has entered her 2nd semester of college. But the only thing that kept Malia from moving forward was opening up to her new friends about her painful past. It wasn’t until Arden caught her attention when her deeper feelings about falling in love again caused in uproar in her heart.

Like to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/139035350-invisible-wounds
Genre: teen fiction/YA fiction


#233

Name of Book: The Deviants

Author/Name: AveryJutsu (J. Wu)

Short Summary:

Almost twenty years have passed since the Great Purge. Executions have been keeping the Deviant population down, but despite the king’s efforts, the magic users refuse to completely vanish. What illusionary tranquility the kingdom of Regnum has basked in for so long is about to be shattered as the Deviants prepare to finally take back their lives.

A loyal healer seeks knowledge, an insouciant warrior desires violence, and a humble hunter pursues peace. With brambles growing at their feet, lightning flickering in their eyes, fires dancing in their palms…the Deviants refuse to live in fear any longer.

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/140957564-the-deviants

Genre: Fantasy

Thanks in advance! And your story sounds interesting, I’ll be sure to give it a read!


#234

Name of Book: Darkness Embodied


Author/Name: @ificarediwouldtellu


Short Summary: For twenty years, Jensen Avery has been raised with the knowledge that at the rise of the moon on her twenty-first birthday, she will murder her twin brother. It is a tradition that she had been born to carry-out.

She is the all-powerful monster of her people; destined for glory; destined for isolation.

Jensen has never wanted to be the monster the world takes her for, but a tragedy shakes her life and rocks her resolve. For the first time, she begins to genuinely fear for the very state of her soul. She could see the darkness forming in her eyes and she knew that it would consume her if she stayed.

So she ran.

She didn’t expect to get far and she didn’t expect to meet Kaleo. An unexpected and volatile partnership, the longer she stays with him, the closer she grows to losing the best parts of herself.

It is a lesson she learned long ago: darkness cannot sire light and monsters cannot truly love.

But, is it a lesson that she will continue to heed?


Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/160786267-darkness-embodied


Genre: Paranormal (and technically werewolf


#235

Love these type of posts! I’ll also totally read two chapters of your story!

Name of Book: Airborn

Author/Name: Illona

Short Summary: Deep within the earths forgotten past, in a dimension different from ours, lies a story of the Airborn. Airborn are the winged people that ruled the skies. They once lived in harmony with the humans until a cruel human king came into rule causing havoc upon the Airborn and sent them into hiding far over the sea of sand where no one dared to travel. Centuries later generations have passed for both the humans and the Airborn. Both of them considers the other a myth. Beings that never existed. What happens when a prophecy causes their two worlds to meet again?

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/146037178-airborn

Genre: Fantasy, romance, Adventure


#236

Thank you so much for doing this. It’s much appreciated c:

Name of Book: Stuck Between the Rivals
Author/Name: Authorsho
Short Summary: Liliana and Lucas are inseparable. As next door neighbors and childhood friends, the two had been attached to the hip through all of high school. Despite their difference in social status, nobody dares to go in between their friendship.

Everything changes once she meets Kylo, the rivaling high school’s football captain. Flirtatious, adventurous, and devilishly handsome; Kylo is everything Lucas stood against. So why is Liliana so attracted to him?

How will Lucas react?
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168485815-stuck-between-the-rivals
Genre: Teen fiction, Romance


#237

Book Name: Handwritten Poems
Author: @TockAC
Short Summary: In this story, you’ll meet a broken-hearted girl named Lexi who is dealing with an identity crisis.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164997855-handwritten-poems
Genre: Poetry


#238

That sounds really interesting, I’ll get back to you when I’ve finished!


#239

Got it, I’ll PM you when finished!


#240

Thank you, I would really appreciate it :slight_smile: , I’ll tell you when I’ve finished my review!