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#241

I’ll PM you when finished :slight_smile:


#242

Thanks for replying, I’ll PM you when finished :slight_smile:


#243

Do you do poetry?


#244

Yup!


#245

Well if you do:
Name of Book : Thundering poems
Author/Name : @Shadow_wonder
Short Summary : I don’t know how you would describe poetry…
Link to Book : https://www.wattpad.com/story/167879126-thundering-poems-tqa2k18
Genre : Poetry


#246

Cool thnx, let me know if you accept mine


#247

Name of Book: A Maiden’s Kitty
Author/Name: @TheMCOfficial
Short Summary: A shut-in and a runaway… both felt segregated because of their differences to what’s considered normal. Perhaps their meeting is what fate had in store for them?
These two will remain at each other’s side forever… because love knows no boundaries.
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164870339-a-maiden’s-kitty
Genre: Romance.


#248

I’ll read it and PM you when finished.


#249

Great! I’ll let you know when finished :slight_smile:


#250

Thanks!


#251

Name of Book: Special Agent Loki Laufeyson
Author/Name: Skylar Wittenborn @darthwitty
Short Summary: A Marvel/NCIS crossover.
When Agent Gibbs of NCIS gets a mysterious visitor from S.H.I.E.L.D., he is forced to take custody of an infamous war criminal from the legendary Asgard: Loki Laufeyson. He is tasked with the rehabilitation of the Asgardian, a job neither he nor his team wish to take on. But orders are orders, and they are stuck with Loki.

Loki Laufeyson has no wish to mingle with the mortal investigative officers, but the only way he leaves NCIS is either as a respectable citizen or in a bodybag, so he’s stuck serving under the authority of Leroy Jethro Gibbs. But facing the mortals means facing the uncontrollable darkness inside himself, while a new, surprising feeling begins to flood the god of mischief: belonging.

Can he learn to fit in before it’s too late? Can he learn to trust them with his dark past? Or will the whole team fall victim to his dreadful secret?

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/157156137-special-agent-loki-laufeyson
Genre: Fanfiction

Thanks in advance! I really appreciate it!


#252

I’ll PM you when finished :slight_smile:


#253

Thank you! Once again, I seriously appreciate this!

Have a nice day!


#254

It’s LGBT, if you’re cool with it


#255

Name of Book: Renegades

Author/Name: EmilyGJones

Short Summary: A space opera called Renegades, about a road trip on a spaceship, a found family, and a whole lot of aliens threatening life as everyone knows it.

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/160001238-renegades

Genre: Science Fiction


#256

Name Of Story: Confessions of an Angel

Genre: Dark poetry

Chapters: 3 fairly short ones

Ongoing /completed: completed

Link to story:https://www.wattpad.com/story/168458194-confessions-of-an-angel

Please read only if you think you do not have staunch religious beliefs.


#257

Name of Book: Dreamt
Author/Name: @lily1066xc
Short Summary: Elise Silva exists only in the shadow of her twin Jeremy. The lack of attention she receives in reality causes her to find solace only when she dreams where she is always with Jay. Jay provides her constant company, protection, and reassurance. However, when she meets Luke, Jay completely disappears from her dreams. Although devastated by Jay’s abrupt disappearance, Luke pushes Elise to open herself up more and shows her the benefits of manifesting her reality over the facade of living in a dream.
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166774683-dreamt
Genre: fiction / teen fiction


#258

I would love it you have the time to review my novel. Thank you for your consideration! :grinning:

Name of Book: Beast within the Beauty

Author/Name: Jenna

Short Summary: A Beauty and the Beast retelling in which a bride is annually sent to be sacrificed to the Beast’s castle only to be returned as a dead body within the first month of marriage. Our protagonist has no intention of being a faithful bride and instead wants to kill the Beast.

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168308142-beast-within-the-beauty-a-beauty-and-the-beast

Genre: Romance and a bit of Fantasy


#259

Here After
Kendra Craighead @kendraislit

Rae Hunter exists between the “then,” the “now” and the “what will be.” Ever since surviving one of the biggest earthquakes to hit the West Coast, Rae has been able to see into the pasts of those she touches, as well as into their futures.

Her visions make normal life difficult, to say the least, but when her “sight” reveals the end of the world, Rae must find a way to protect herself and the people she loves from what she believes to be the coming apocalypse.

https://www.wattpad.com/603133544-here-after-author's-note

Vampire/Paranormal (?) lol

Thanks in advance!


#260

Totally cool with it, I’ll get back to you when finished.