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#341

Thank you so much!


#342

Name of Book: Animalians The Armageddon War: Book One: The Valtan War
Author/Name: Nephilacorp
Short Summary: The first part in the armageddon war on Magalin Thuur, the world ruled by DolStaya.
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/662158266-animalians-the-armageddon-war-book-one-the-valtan
Genre: Fantasy/ Science Fiction


#343

Name of Book Disorder
Author/Name @NikkiSHunter
Short Summary:
Depressed and anxious from years of social isolation and bullying, 30-year old Claire Walker’s tentative grip on emotional stability is further strained when her father, William - a theoretical physicist - dies without warning.

While recovering from a migraine at her father’s wake, she discovers his last, unpublished work; a controversial model of the universe, which if proved, would challenge our most basic notions - not only of space and time - but, of life itself.

Claire’s own life is a tale of distortion - of giftedness masked by disability - and she seizes upon the manuscript as her Raison d’Etre. To have a hand in its publication would reconcile a lifetime of pain and self-doubt.

On the day of William’s funeral, Claire’s new-found purpose is challenged when she receives conflicting testimony about the soundness and intent of her father’s last work. What she ultimately chooses to believe will either set her on a path of healing or spiraling out of control.
Link to Book https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/165305428-disorder
Genre: Literary Fiction


#344

Thank you so much. No pressure at all. Good luck with your gifts :slight_smile:


#345

Name of Book: Eachtra
Author/Name: @heyhannahj
Short Summary: Keidy Henshaw has no intentions of celebrating Christmas this year–not until she discovers another student hiding on her college campus for the holidays. Liam Callaghan is an Irish exchange student visiting her university for the year and he’s determined to rescue Keidy from her melancholy and help her enjoy the Christmas season. Keidy needs to gather samples from different species of pine trees for a college class and Liam hasn’t seen much of the United States, so the unlikely pair embark on an impromptu road trip to Christmas tree farms and holiday landmarks all over the country. At first, Liam and Keidy are only drawn together by chance, but their spontaneous journey reveals that something deeper is pulling the couple together.
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168605593-eachtra-a-christmas-novella
Genre: romance (with new/young adult themes)


#346

Thank you


#347

I am extremely sorry for that, I guess I missed it. To make up for it, I’ll put you in front of the current queue! Please give me the link and I would be happy to review a couple chapters. Again, I am terribly sorry!


#348

Sure thing, I’ll read it and let you know!


#349

Got it, I’ll PM you when finished!


#350

I’ll tell you when I’m finished :slight_smile:


#351

I’ll totally read it and get back to you!


#352

It’s no problem, I understand and was just confused on the status is all. You can review it at any time really, I’m in no major rush of any kind. Here’s the link:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/138416778


#353

No, I feel absolutely terrible about it, so I’ll make sure to get it done this time :sweat_smile: thanks!


#354

No problem, like I said, take your time.


#355

Thanks, much appreciated :slight_smile:


#356

thank you <3 !


#357

Adventures in Cripple Creek
Denna Hunter

In the spirit of Huckleberry Finn and To Kill A Mockingbird, Gert Werner is an adventurous and mischievous boy who finds himself in troubling situations. Set in 1882,his fun loving ways shine throughout his adventures, until one day, his friend is accused of murder. As the son of the Sheriff, he seeks out to prove his friend’s innocents. Bringing danger to close to home.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/169722543-adventures-in-cripple-creek

Fiction/historical fiction

There are only two chapters posted so, it should be a quick and fun read. I would love to know what you think. Good or bad :slight_smile:

Thank you so much!


#358

Yes, I’ll get to it when I can :slight_smile: