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#141

Thank you very much :heavy_heart_exclamation: I’m currently reading your book right now! I’m loving your style of writing :smile:


#142

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it :slight_smile:


#143

Of course!! :heavy_heart_exclamation:


#144

Oh, I must warn you, my story has extremely long chapters :sweat: :laughing: The prologue isn’t very long, but the first part/chapter thing is lol


#145

Dragon Rider In The Modern World.

ValerieJackson2003

Valerie is a Dragon Rider. The catch is that she lives in 2018, where everyone thinks that they are just mythical/fictional creatures, so it is impossible for her to get help to train Isaldrí, her dragon, and must be careful not to let anyone discover her secret. What will happen the day her best friends figure it out? Is it possible that there are other Riders like her out there?

Fantasy


#146

Name of Book The First Dance

Author/Name Eden Soul / @Keeper_of_Souls

Short Summary Annika Clark is Lincoln High’s vigilante, she stands up for the victims of bullying, but she pays the price. She doesn’t have friends, that is until she attends the masquerade prom and meets a mysterious stranger.

Link to Book https://my.w.tt/W6Sj51JTKR

Genre Short Story / YA


#147

Hey, I’ve noticed your thread and I’d appreciate your feedback. I’m not sure if you like romance/ drama but hope you’ll give it a read. :slight_smile: The chapters are around 2.5k, a 1st person narrative, recommended 17+. I hope you’ll like it. Cheers, Laura :slightly_smiling_face:

Name of Book: Against All Odds

Author/Name: Laura Bubble/ @AtomicKitten666

Short Summary: A story about conquering your fears, finding your place in life, falling in love and fighting like hell to keep that spark of happiness once you find it. (The entire summary in the link below.)

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/119764716-against-all-odds

Genre: Romance/ Drama


#148

Name of Book: The Greatest Obsession
Author/Name: @SoulBurningBright or Heather Ramsburg
Short Summary: Elijah Marks has always dreamed of marrying the love of his life, Irina Snow. His dreams will be coming true and in the upcoming months, he’ll be a happily married man. His plans are thwarted at the arrival of a stalker in the night, who leaves Elijah with bloody bites and wounded confidence. In an effort to capture the monster and prove to his soon-to-be father-in-law that the stalker is not human, he allows the being into his room to be caught in the act. It is Elijah’s greatest mistake that leads to his greatest obsession.
Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/77716238-the-greatest-obsession
Genre: Vampire (Historical LGBT romance)

Side note: By Wattpad standards, this is a slowburn heavily shrouded in mystery in the opening chapters. It’s a prologue & 24 chapters so far so I get it if you don’t read all of it for this review. I just hope you get far enough to enjoy it lol.


#149

Name of Book:The Baddie
Author/Name: anastasia101_
Short Summary:
He Pushed Me Against The Door And Looked Into My Eyes.
We Were Mere Inches Apart And My Heart Was Racing .
I Stood Still As He Leaned In. But Before His Lips Could Reach Mine I Heard Gun Shots.
And The Second Thing I Know Is Jordans Body Laying In Front Of Me.
While I Was Being Pulled From Behind.

Angel Standorf Was Your Ordinary Badass Yet So Out Going And Cute. 
When She Moved To La With Her Family She Wanted To Have A Fun Year That Was Full Of Partying And Trouble .
 She Didn't Think She Was Going To Cross Paths With Jordan Kingston, Now Did She?

Jordon Is A Player And A Badboy He Is So Egotistic, Arrogant And Gorgeous.
What Happens When These Two Badasses Meet? 

Join Them In A Roller Coaster Filled With   Fake Friends, Drama, jealousy,  Heartbreak And Love.

Link to Book:https://www.wattpad.com/story/161996227-the-baddie
Genre: teen fiction

#150

Name of Book - The Road Back
Author/Name - IvorRichards
Short Summary - It’s just a one-page short story at the moment that I may expand
Link to Book - it won’t let me
Genre - short story


#151

I’ll check it out and let you know.


#152

Ok, i’ll get back to you :slight_smile:


#153

I love romance/drama! I’ll check it out and let you know.


#154

I’ll read as much as I can!


#155

Ok! I’ll let you know!


#156

thank you, I really appreciate it :slight_smile:


#157

I’ll read it and let you know :slight_smile:


#158

Thanks


#159

Name of Book: Eleutheromaniac
Author/Name: ClassicImagination
Short Summary:
Eleutheromania
(n.) an intense and irresistible desire for freedom.

When her parents break another one of their no-good promises, Elizabeth Blackwell decides to run away from the five-star resort she’s staying at for the summer. A spontaneous road trip with an unconventional waiter is set into motion and Elizabeth is faced with things she’s never had to experience before. What was first thought to be a get away from her over-controlling parents turns into an adventure of a lifetime – one where Elizabeth comes to realize just how much of an eleutheromaniac she really is.

Link to Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/58415688-eleutheromaniac
Genre: YA/Romance/Humor


#160

Name of book: Damnation
Author: @4R1Y1T3 (Ritzel)
Summary: A war between angels and demons have broken out, with the seven archangels right in the middle of it. In the end, who will win?
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/144700351-bts-damnation-✓
Genre: Fanfiction
I understand if you don’t get interested since it’s a fanfiction. It’s my first published book I finished and I’d love your feedback! :slight_smile: