Title : Shadows paradox (Forth draft)
(I hope I’m allowed to post the cover here too)
Doing another post because the first act of my book is done and was wondering if I could get any beta readers to check it out for grammar and editing?
I will be doing the second half soon as well.
This is the forth draft of my book so I’m hoping the new revisions are doing well.
What’s the story about ?
This story follows Dan. A student at Melbourne University. He has a peculiar ability to traverse the multiverse.
One day he has an experiment but it was stopped before it could start after meeting with a mysterious person that has ties with a secret group known as Nerola but to the public, it’s called Globe City.
With this knowledge, Dan is placed in a dangerous situation with his life along with his friends are in danger.
What I’m looking for?
I’m looking for feedback on the book plot
Where I can improve on
What I should add
If there anything I should remove
Grammar and punctuation
What can I do in return ?
I can return a permanent follow and give feedback on your story as well
Now if you have any preferred method of sending your story let me know as well. Either being wattpad or google doc or PDF.
I am in no rush for when the reading needs to be completed but I do want to know how I can improve the story plot and finalize it before I write the sequel
link to my story