5/10 personally, I don’t like the title name, I don’t really get it (expect the RAN part which I assume is for the name). Meanwhile. your summary is kind of confusing. Why does it matter if Ran is indecisive? What genre is this? I thought fantasy since you said swordsmanship but then used the term ‘high school’ so i’m not sure. Also, what man is he hoping to be and why? Answering that could make your reader more interested in Ran’s journey.
Good luck x
Title: Twelve Faces Of The Mood
Summary: Neverland is dying.
China has been brought to its knees.
The secret police have a tight reign on Wonderland.
A queen is raising an army against a frog.
We all thought we knew the tales.
But we didn’t truly.
We only knew of how they rose to greatness.
But not how they fell to ruins.