7/10 You have a great title, but your synopsis felt a bit long and a just a little hard to follow. I think you could shorten it a bit.
Title: The Element of Life
I was just an ordinary teenage girl who had just turned 17. Yes, I had my ups and downs in life. Buying a new jeep was an amazing experience, but that was nothing compared to dealing with an ex-boyfriend trying to make my life miserable, facing an eating disorder, and trying to overcome the fact that my father left us when I was younger. I suppose it’s good to have friends by your side even if it’s just 1.
Life changed that fateful day when I noticed a strange light in the park. My poor judgement told me to visit the park and I did. Little did I know that touching that light would give me a power. What was this power? This was the power to bring things back to life! Nothing was ever the same.