Hello! I (like many others) am working to improve my finished novel for the 2020 Wattys. I’m already pretty far into the second draft, but I would like some beta readers (who are not my close friends and family) to read the original first draft and give me feedback to go off of while finishing my second draft.
The first draft is COMPLETED, but short (I wrote it very quickly, and it shows).
I need readers who enjoy MATURE, NEW ADULT ROMANCE (with some science fiction elements) to read through and leave comments on what they enjoy, what the story is lacking, and what they could do without.
I don’t need structural/copy-editing type feedback. The first draft has MANY issues and those are being addressed already in the second draft. I need content feedback, to make this the best story it can be.
“Sex and Poetry”
New Adult, Romance, Science Fiction, Mature
Married to a handsome, rich older man, Maura Foster wants for nothing… except affection. When her household android is given a sexy new modification, will she be able to resist temptation and remain faithful? Or will she give in and find the passion and romance she’s been longing for?
Will gladly read, and leave extensive, constructive feedback on up to 3 chapters of your work (They don’t have to be in order, and they don’t have to be from the same book.) I’m limiting to 3 because I plan to be as thorough as possible.
Because you’re being so kind as to read my work, I will also happily follow you!
“Payment” will be completed after you have read and commented on my book. You don’t need to comment on every chapter, and if you want to just send me a PM detailing your thoughts at the end, that works as well.
Thank you in advance for your time and attention! <3