Hi, sorry it took me so long but I’m here to complete my payment but here it is.
Your critique helped ease some of my fears about failing to portray my characters the way I wanted to along with the story being action packed. I heeded what you mentioned about editing since I definitely need to do a sweep.
Any suggestions of improvements:
I’ve only one suggestion. In your summary, you could include reactions to the content you’ve read and whether it had a certain impact on how you felt or if it failed to pack it’s intended punch.