Wattpad Username: @lily1066xc
Current title of work to be critiqued: Dreamt
URL for the main navigation page of the work to be critiqued: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166774683-dreamt
Chapters/parts for this request: Chapters 1-2
Wattpad Category for the work: Fiction / Teen Fiction
Type(s) of feedback requested: This is my first time writing! Any feedback or critiques would be great, especially on the concept of Jay.
Any type(s) of feedback not wanted: I wrote the dream segment in past tense to differentiate the dream from present-time narration and I got several comments on the tense change. I plan on changing this soon so it’s not necessary to comment on that haahah.
Anything else?: The more I read my first chapter and the more I get critiques, I’m beginning to like it less and less, so feel free to kinda rip it apart so I can really fix it up. Also, chapters 3-4 are pretty short and not a lot of people have read it, so if you ever have time to check those chapters out and give me feedback that would be really great! Thanks so much