8/10 I think it was great, It’s probably not the beginning of your book but if it was I would continue reading, I would make like the 'What would I do?" part in italics because it’s like another layer of her cutting off her own thoughts. Otherwise I think it’s pretty good.
I have to remind myself as I wake up, that I’m no longer in a place where I have to fight in order to survive. That I’m safe; No one is going to jump out and attack me anytime soon. The Memories of when I hit 14 and it suddenly felt like everyone around me was gunning to take me out to pass the test is hard thing to stop being afraid of. I’m just lucky I managed to escape when I did. Otherwise, someone older and stronger would have easily murdered me and taken my charm.