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#63

https://www.wattpad.com/story/58639926-before-sunrise-on-hold

One wrong turn could be her last…

  The moment Lena Gray awakes, she realizes three things: She is not where she belonged. She is not alone. She is definitely not the same. 
  
  As she grows accustomed to her new body and abilities and faces new challenges back-to-back, dangerous foreboding takes a hold of her, making her expect the worst with each new clue.
  
  Someone is there-relishing in her paranoia and fear. Like a predator toying with its prey, she is their next victim. 
  
  And no matter where she goes, with every desperate step, they are right behind her.
  
  Lena finds herself caught in a battle between trust and fear as an unlikely savior comes to her aid and those already claiming to be for her, seem to be having a change of heart. As the lines between truth and deception become blurred, Lena's fate is on the line. Yet, as the final battle draws near, Lena finds herself surrounded by one question:
  
  Who is the real enemy?

#64

Title: The Kingdom of Peryton White
Genre: Science fiction, Mythology
Description/Blurb: In the Kingdom of Peryton White, the heir to the thone has returned, but though this should be good news the council is now in trouble as their secrets might be reviled. Meanwhile, there is a distraction, the Shadows steal Artemis’s arrow and even though everyone tells Lucy and her friends not to take the problem into their hands. She and her friends go for an adventure that will test their limits. Will lucy survive the desitions she has to take? Will she honour her parents? or will she join the temptation?
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/169467160-the-kingdom-of-peryton-white-artemis’s-arrow


#65

Feminism for Dummies

Independent and sassy, Kala is not afraid to talk about sensitive topics and make fun of them.
She will lit the world of fire by throwing unique jokes, telling the most unpredictable stories, making her crowd cry from laughing and presenting a peculiar perspective of things: a woman’s point of view.

You are not going to be the same after you meet Kala!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/184612644-feminism-for-dummies

This is very different from what you might be used to read, so please take your time
I’m excited to read your story, I’ll give you feedback too


#67

The Pineapple Fountain

New Adult (romance/adventure)

The story of a college graduate who decides that there is more to life than just living after an accident almost kills her. Mia decides to take risks and drop everything, including her family, her friends, and her boyfriend to pursue the life full of excitement she has been craving. Mia’s adventures take her on a trip full of self-love and growth. But is this fantasized life worth the sacrifices she has made? After months of meeting new people and experiencing all life has to offer, Mia must choose between the life she has always wanted and the life she has always had.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/184649460-the-pineapple-fountain


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