I Finished writing my first romance novel and I love someone to read it and give me feedback. It’s the first book of a trilogy i’m planning to write.
I’d love someone to check my grammar and vocabulary (English is not my first language). I also want her/him to give me some feedback on the flow of the story, the characters. Someone that can tell me if the chapters are interesting and captivating enough to keep reading and find out what happens next, what should I add, if there’s anything I should remove, and so on.
I’m looking for a long term beta reader , meaning, I’d like her/him to read the whole book and give me an honest review and constructive criticism on it.
If you’re looking for a intersting, sweet, sexy, hot and steamy love story with drama in it , you should try giving a shot to my work. I’d really appreciate your help! (I can permanently follow you if you want some kind of payment).
- Title: Simply Irresistible
- Genre and sub-genres: Romance/Mature/Drama//Adult
Nick Brown is a thirty-year-old millionaire who is successful in business but who is tired of being surrounded by the same insatiable, easy women that want to be with him for his money.
Single mom Emma is skeptical and afraid of love after being badly hurt in the past.
When Charlotte, Emma 's six-year-old daughter yearns for a daddy in her life things are about to change for all of them in a way they never could imagine.
Simply irresistible is a story packed with love, romance, lust, desire and of course a lot of drama.