Genre and sub-genres: Epic/Low/Dark Fantasy
Word count: Approx 130,000 words (third draft)
After witnessing the brutal beheading of his best friend, nineteen-year-old Kinsha travels to the capital to exact his revenge. Facing deceit and betrayal, he risks exposing his life as a notorious criminal, yet should he fail, he’ll lose the chance at vengeance forever.
I would like for whoever is reading this to focus on the plot, the pacing and the tone of each pivotal character. It would be great if you could spot the differences between them and alert me if they sound similar, or have any inconsistencies. Also, please look for plot-holes. Lord knows I’ve tried many a time to find them myself, but they keep continuing to elude me.
In-line comments are fine, as is messaging me directly. Thank you all in advance. I can’t wait for everyone’s feedback. Regarding the issue of payment, I would be happy to follow/shout out whoever is interested and give comments on a few chapters of your choosing.