completed Book One .
Hey everyone so I can’t remember when I finished this exactly but I believe it was somewhere around 2018 maybe?
Anyway I haven’t picked it up kinda since then so it just sitting around but I wanted to see if I can get any beta readers for this to see what I can improve on so I can finish this one as well?
The only cover I have is a hand drawn one since I wrote when I was about 17 maybe? So it been a long time since I touched it now that I’m 20 lol.
Shadows of Dystopia
word count 69926 Page count 215
A world full of magic and mystery, where gods rule and kings and queen will lead
And Elemental fight for better peace. Where sin are of man mislead… The World of Zell is in danger, sin have emerged from the depth of chaos.
The secret of god have arisen.
Hugo, is on a journey to find his father, only to uncover the secret of which he has left behind him.
What are the seven sins.
Who is the rightful heir
Why are the gods in the capital?
How will it all turn it in the end?
Will they uncover the truth, or will it be too late and what are the sin planning?
And what the gods planning?
The journey is a long one
But in time all will be uncovered.
What I’m looking for?
I’m looking for feedback on the book plot
Where I can improve on
What I should add
If there anything I should remove
Grammar and punctuation
What can I do in return ?
I can return a permanent follow and give feedback on your story as well
Now if you have any preferred method of sending your story let me know as well. Either being wattpad or google doc or PDF.
I am in no rush for when the reading needs to be completed but I do want to know how I can improve the story plot and finalize it before I write the sequel