I need beta readers for my story! I really want to hear back about the plot, characterization, and chapters that might not be necessary to the full story. Also, anything that the story lacked that you feel could be added to make it better (another character, more scenes with a character, less scenes with another scene, etc.)
I will do read for read, if it’s in the same genre as other genres don’t interest me as much. So, if you try to do a read for read with me and you want me to read a horror story, please don’t feel offended if I say no. Thanks in advance!
Title: I Shouldn’t Want You
Genre: Teen Fiction/Romance
Synopsis: From the moment Anna met Brogan, she knew she would do anything to preserve their easygoing friendship. From the moment she met Brogan’s brother Danny, she felt trouble deep in her belly, but it was more inviting than ominous. After a drunken night filled with sexual tension, Danny and Anna start a secret friends-with-benefits relationship. When deeper feelings emerge between them, they realize their secret can’t remain hidden forever. Torn between her friendship with Brogan and her new feelings for Danny, Anna is thrown into an overwhelming decision.
Please give some feedback/constructive criticism on plot holes, characterization, writing style appreciated).