Looking for Beta Readers on Teen Romance Novel

I need beta readers for my story! I really want to hear back about the plot, characterization, and chapters that might not be necessary to the full story. Also, anything that the story lacked that you feel could be added to make it better (another character, more scenes with a character, less scenes with another scene, etc.)

I will do read for read, if it’s in the same genre as other genres don’t interest me as much. So, if you try to do a read for read with me and you want me to read a horror story, please don’t feel offended if I say no. Thanks in advance!


Title: I Shouldn’t Want You

Genre: Teen Fiction/Romance

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/14063571-i-shouldn’t-want-you

Synopsis: From the moment Anna met Brogan, she knew she would do anything to preserve their easygoing friendship. From the moment she met Brogan’s brother Danny, she felt trouble deep in her belly, but it was more inviting than ominous. After a drunken night filled with sexual tension, Danny and Anna start a secret friends-with-benefits relationship. When deeper feelings emerge between them, they realize their secret can’t remain hidden forever. Torn between her friendship with Brogan and her new feelings for Danny, Anna is thrown into an overwhelming decision.

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Please give some feedback/constructive criticism on plot holes, characterization, writing style appreciated).

Hi! I would love to do a beta read for you! How long is your story? I have a short story that I am looking for feedback on. I only have the first 3 parts posted but if you are enjoying I will be happy to post more. My story is a collection of letters between husband and wife, when the husband goes off to war.

Just let me know!

Ooh I love the premise for that story! I can definitely provide some feedback for that!

My story is 21 chapters long! I would love for you to give a read to it! You can also personal message me and we can really get into the details of suggestions to be made if you don’t want to put it all in the comments, etc.

ok, awesome!! Ill give it a read and see how Im doing with comments and then see if a personal message is better.

For my story, I have the rest written but I am trying to figure out if it is worth publishing on amazon, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

I’ll beta read for you if you look at my werewolf story Tales Beneath a White Moon. The first book deals with the characters in their teenager stage.

I would love to beta read your story! I am a sucker for teen romance novels. I will do it for free, as I do not have any stories ready to be read yet.

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Great! Thank you!

I’m super interested if your still looking for another set of eyes. I’d only ask that you’d look over my story Teen Romance Novel that I’m starting to post.

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Sure, I would love to! Please let me know what things exactly you’re trying to focus on in your novel!

I’m mainly wanting to work on readability, word choice, and basically if I’m able to hold attention.
Here’s a link to mine and I’ll get started looking over yours. I can send you a pm so we can stay in contact.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/218339334-least-likely-to

If you are still considering Beta Readers, I have a Teen Romance novel that I have just finished that I would love to have a read for read Beta deal with. PM me if you are interested B xxx