I’m looking for beta’s for my recently completed novel “The Crimson Cloak”.
It’s a shorter book as the first in a series and my first complete novel. That being said, I’m pretty happy with it. However, I’m not sure how well I got my story across.
So, I’m looking for people to read and comment on it to let me know how I’m doing.
Title: The Crimson Cloak
Genres: Fantasy, Romance, Adventure, Young Adult
Description: 18 year old Van is tired of not knowing who she is, but when she visits her grandmother’s house for the summer she ends up with more answers than she was ready for. Thrown into a world of magic hidden just beneath her nose, she learns that her story has already been written, but what part is she meant to play?
Please PM me if you’d like to help out! I’m looking for 2-3 readers to start and I’d like to ask you a few questions once you’re done. Thank you and have a great day!