Looking for Read-for-Read



Subject line: I am offering positive feedback to anyone whose interested in receiving commentary on their stories.

Post: I love reviewing mature romance, spiritual based stories, fantasy and, under certain exceptions science fiction.

I do not accept horror stories or anything with heavy violence in it.

I will do a read-for-read with commentary and critics. I will read up to 4 chapters of your story plus your prologue since that is all I’ve posted. This is feedback-for-feedback only. Thanks and I look forward to reading your stories. I will begin reading once your reading of my story is complete.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/178511343-chapter-one-of-the-prequel-to-the-shadow-spaces


Hey @RebeccaSalazar!

I’d love it if you could check out my new story “All”, a mature romance which is now finally complete (woohoo!). Just to let me know whether you think the story develops at a good pace during the first few chapters or whether you feel there could be more interaction between the two main characters before their relationship moves up a gear…

No worries if not! :slight_smile:




All [adverb]; completely, without exception.

When 18-year-old singer Abi meets Noah, a moody but disarming guitarist, she soon discovers his tough exterior is hiding more than just the tattoos that mark his skin.

Thrown into a world of secrets, emotions and sexual discovery, will their relationship ever become more than a confusing game of cat and mouse? As one person’s career takes off and the walls become to crumble between them, can Abi and Noah’s love survive the impact?

[WARNING: Contains sexual content and swearing]


Sure Lucille I’d love to. Just let me know you’ve completed reading my chapters first and I’ll be happy to give you some feedback. It sounds awesome. :grinning: Just heart this post to let me know.


@Lucille_Dixon I finished giving you feedback on your story. It’s pretty good overall. Great job.


Hey! I have 5 chapters of my nautical fantasy story The Song of the Black Sea if you’re interested?
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/user/CatC171


Sure. I’ll be happy to leave my feedback once you’ve read through chapter four of my story. I’ll leave feedback up to chapter 5 of your story.


Cool. I’ll add you to my read for read list and be on it tomorrow.

Thanks for taking a look!



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Okay, thanks for letting me know.


hey i’d love for you to read my story!
Title: The Kingdom of Ice
Summary: Settled in the far north is the kingdom of Noir, where snow covers the entire land. Under the rule of the king, the people of Noir live under complete military occupation causing outrage throughout the country. Enter Sima Reine, captain of a small cavalry unit and genius son of a powerful military family, and Aria, a tough street urchin who takes part in a growing rebellion. Bound by their duties to their loved ones and their positions in society, both struggle to find their paths in a country where violence and war is the way of life.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/181120975-the-kingdom-of-ice


Sure, I’ll be happy to leave comments on the first three chapters since this is my final update of my story and I’m rewriting each of the chapters. Once you’ve read my chapters and left your feedback, then I’d be happy to read your story. It sounds really interesting. :smile:


I’ll gladly check out your story.

My story is Daughters of Fate (Fantasy) https://www.wattpad.com/story/178527259-daughters-of-fate

They say that the Tear of Earoni is a part of the Great Goddess Earoni herself. That it fell one night from her great eye when she cried. And that to possess it gives one the power of a god.

For centuries, the all-powerful artifact has been lost. Hidden away in the mountains behind magic and stone to keep it out of the hands of the last remaining Blood Lord. A man who has sworn that he will have it, even if it costs him his last undying breath.

Over those hundreds of years, the Hitithe Rebellion has fought to bring down Lord Hedric. But to no avail. Now they are on the verge of collapse and defeat. Desperate and failing.

Even the gods themselves have grown restless. The Fate of Chaos and the Fate of Law have both played their hands to attempt to sway the direction of the world. But, as with all things, the will of the gods is not enough. For mortals are notoriously difficult to control.

Sheala and Cassandra, twin sisters, find themselves on opposite sides of the war that rages to settle the fate of the world. But while one rushes to meet her destiny, the other is running from what the Fates have decreed.

In the end, both will have to make choices as to which side they are on and what they are willing to sacrifice.


Sure, I’ll take a look at your story too.


wait can i request a different story actually?
Title: Jericho
Summary: A writer sits in her apartment for days on end, searching for inspiration. She has a cabinet just for that, her own little cabinet of inspirations. One day she encounters a strange man she names Jericho, who changes her life forever.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/181439802-jericho

I need more help on this one than the other.


Sure, if you’d like.


I’ve left feedback on your first two chapters.


Thank you



I’d love to have your comments on my story.
here’s the link https://www.wattpad.com/story/181348914-unexpected.
thanks for taking a look. :slight_smile:


After their engagements were swapped, the stepsisters hatred for each other intensified. Stacy was lucky to finally have Ayo, the only man her stepsister sister Melinda had ever loved, and the only man she had always wanted.
But luck didn’t shine on Melinda. Well, it did but no one knew, not even Mr Henry. No one could’ve imagined that Mr Sebastian wasn’t afterall taking a young wife for his oldself but for his grandson Kevin Sebastian.
Kevin Sebastian, the sole heir of the Sebastian’s generational wealth never believed in love and commitment. His only interest was his work and barely his five year old daughter Kemi whom he kept a secret from the world.
Will Melinda’s love be strong enough to conquer Kevin’s cold heart? Will her love be enough to break down his wall of defense and make him and his daughter happy or will she end up in his fury and live the rest of her life loathing her stepsister Stacy.


Hey. I’ve left some comments on your story. Thanks for taking a look at mine.