Looking for very short stories to read & comment on!

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#21

This technically isn’t a short story, but I started a new story called Daya: Eternal Pursuit that only has 2 chapters out so far, so it’s a short read :slight_smile: I’d love some feedback on my new chapter!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/168917081-daya-eternal-pursuit


#22

Here’s my story that’s still ongoing! I want to see how people think of the prologue before continuing the series.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/169207651-magician-of-the-desert


#23

Thanks for reading!


#24

The description sounds interesting :slight_smile: I’ll have to check it out.


I have a completed sci-fi short story if that’s your kind of thing. It’s about 5k words, or 6 parts:

Depths

"Down here, life was scarce, and the creatures outside her bunker grew larger, lonelier, and hungrier."
A girl faces the darkness of isolation and the monster that's come to visit. 14-year-old Maya lives in a bunker at the bottom of the ocean. Even the scientists recording her every move can't predict she won't be alone for long.

#25

I’m also on the same boat - I’ve written a short story that I’m thinking of making into a full book later too :blush:

If you have some free time, I’d appreciate it if you can let me know if my story is worth expanding as well, here’s the link: Ugly Fruits and Vegetables

I’ll check yours out now as well :smile:


#26

I have two really short stories if you’re interested and have time!
The Train Over Acheron
A Final Adieu


#27

Sounds like an interesting short story!
I’m currently writing a multi-chaptered but very short storytelling prose piece at the moment that is incomplete but if you’d like to take a look at something that’s a little different from your conventional short story feel free to take a look, comment, or message me.

Here’s the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168907190-despondent


#28

Here’s a short one,still ongoing, I don’t think it will be much longer,maybe 2, or 3 more chapters.
It’s a New Adult Romance story,involving a depressed man, and a joyful woman who lacks self confidence,they’re both 32. I tried to challenge myself,even tho it’s the first story of mine that I publish, by creating a setting,that is completely unknown to me, because both of the main characters are from Estonia,and they’re into Accounting. And I’m a french dude who doesn’t know anything about Accounting.

Here’s the link of the story by the way.
https://www.wattpad.com/660809956-this-girl-chapter-1


#29

I have two historical short stories, not very long!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/169480326-regret
https://www.wattpad.com/story/169479695-anguish


#30

The forgetting pills sounds like an interesting concept!

This is currently short because I’ve only just started, but here is my Nano novel Cursed Gardens <3

https://www.wattpad.com/story/166994398-cursed-gardens


#31

https://www.wattpad.com/story/168907190-despondent
This is short because its written in small excerpts of prose to tell the story.