Looking for very short stories to read & comment on!



This technically isn’t a short story, but I started a new story called Daya: Eternal Pursuit that only has 2 chapters out so far, so it’s a short read :slight_smile: I’d love some feedback on my new chapter!



Here’s my story that’s still ongoing! I want to see how people think of the prologue before continuing the series.



Thanks for reading!


The description sounds interesting :slight_smile: I’ll have to check it out.

I have a completed sci-fi short story if that’s your kind of thing. It’s about 5k words, or 6 parts:


"Down here, life was scarce, and the creatures outside her bunker grew larger, lonelier, and hungrier."
A girl faces the darkness of isolation and the monster that's come to visit. 14-year-old Maya lives in a bunker at the bottom of the ocean. Even the scientists recording her every move can't predict she won't be alone for long.


I’m also on the same boat - I’ve written a short story that I’m thinking of making into a full book later too :blush:

If you have some free time, I’d appreciate it if you can let me know if my story is worth expanding as well, here’s the link: Ugly Fruits and Vegetables

I’ll check yours out now as well :smile:


I have two really short stories if you’re interested and have time!
The Train Over Acheron
A Final Adieu


Sounds like an interesting short story!
I’m currently writing a multi-chaptered but very short storytelling prose piece at the moment that is incomplete but if you’d like to take a look at something that’s a little different from your conventional short story feel free to take a look, comment, or message me.

Here’s the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168907190-despondent


Here’s a short one,still ongoing, I don’t think it will be much longer,maybe 2, or 3 more chapters.
It’s a New Adult Romance story,involving a depressed man, and a joyful woman who lacks self confidence,they’re both 32. I tried to challenge myself,even tho it’s the first story of mine that I publish, by creating a setting,that is completely unknown to me, because both of the main characters are from Estonia,and they’re into Accounting. And I’m a french dude who doesn’t know anything about Accounting.

Here’s the link of the story by the way.


I have two historical short stories, not very long!


The forgetting pills sounds like an interesting concept!

This is currently short because I’ve only just started, but here is my Nano novel Cursed Gardens <3



This is short because its written in small excerpts of prose to tell the story.