Bitten By History
Oof, that beginning was so perfect in Chapter 1! I was so intrigued like, straight away, so points for that . Sorry for lowkey spamming your story with so many comments, I just couldn’t help myself . I’ll be honest, I wasn’t too optimistic about this book when you filled in the form, but now I can see that I was wrong - this is a great book, written by a great writer. I honestly would love to do a full review if time allows/if I had the space to do so. The only problem with grammar and punctuation were some really accidental mistakes - just look it over when you are finished, you’ll see them straight away. Apart from that, your quotation formatting is almost purrr-fect. This is one of the best plots I’ve ever read, and I truly loved this so much. Honestly, if you can impress someone who never reads paranormal/murder/supernatural stories just based on how YA it is and how intriguing it is, your writing career is all set. You have impressed me so much. I absolutely loved this story so far.