- Title: Beta Reader
- Genre and sub-genres: Paranormal, Vampires, Werewolves, Witches, Religious Themes
- What am I looking for: I am looking for someone to read the entire first Act I (10 scenes, plus music lyrics) at the very least or the entire play (plus an additional six scenes and seven songs) and then answer a few questions (some questions may require in depth answers).
The Questions: (You can either answer the questions in a direct message or inline where it is applicable).
Are there any plotholes?
This is the most important question. I am well aware that the religious angle seems to come in out of the blue–I will introduce it earlier when I do my rewrite.
Do the character arcs make sense? Are there any character arcs that seem unresolved? Are there any other character issues that prevent you from connecting to them or to the story?
Are there any other big picture suggestions you have for the story (aside from the fact that the second act is not well developed)?
Payment: I will either beta read your story or complete a detailed critique of 1 chapter (You Beta Read my First Act Only) or 3 chapters (You Beta read Both acts).
Please respond to this ad and wait for my reply before beginning the beta read.
Thank you in advance!