- Title: The Unspeakables
- Genre and sub-genres: Stand alone Fan Fiction, Mystery, Fantasy
- Description: The book has 46 chapters, and I am in the process of revising, but I’ve kind of gotten lost in the story. In particular, I’ve made a change that I’m not sure I should have and need a second opinion on it.
In the original drafts, my main character, Thea, fought Jax and George as they tried to figure out her secret. In this draft, I had her tell them, but I worry that that made things too easy and took away her flaw, so I am looking for an opinion on her character and how the situation is handled. You would have to read my book in its entirety (or at least to the point where Orrin shows up at Thea’s apartment), but I am more than happy to reciprocate. Just know that I do not read RPFs though. Anything else is fair game.