I really suck at writing blurbs. So how can I make this better?
No one’s perfect. It’s a saying that Phineas believes. Faults are what make people human. So when a new girl moves to town who seems to be perfect, somehow better than the best, he can’t help but feel something’s off. When he objects to her dating his brother, everyone says he’s just jealous. That he needs to learn to not be so dependent.
But when his brother’s personality starts changing, Phineas can’t help but wonder if there’s more to his feelings than just jealously.
Plot: A ‘Mary Sue’ moves to town. There’s the ‘love at first sight’ meeting between her and the brother. Everyone, minus Phineas, thinks she’s perfect. The brother starts acting out (and later starts looking like he’s ill even though he not acting like he is). Phineas starts investigating her and discovers she’s a siren that manipulates people to play out her fantasies while she slowly sucks the life out of them. It’s then a race to find out how to stop her before she sucks the life completely out of his brother and everyone else under her spell.