I offer help with your first chapter, first few paragraphs, or your story hook (read: the thing meant to hook readers and keep them going). I’m versed in all kinds of romance, fantasy, paranormal, sci-fi, which means I won’t be of any help with other genres.
I’m not brutal, but I’m honest and I will tell you clearly what works for me and what doesn’t (and why, going by standard good practice for publishing) in the most productive way possible. I will try to also give pointers on what style quirks I notice. You might want my kind of feedback if you’re thinking about publishing your story as a book but aren’t sure yet if you should.
I don’t expect my advice to be taken blindly and I don’t have personal pride invested in this. I just like challenging myself.
Please note: I won’t read more than your first chapter for critique, except if it hits my sweet spot (which I’m a little particular about, so don’t worry, personal preferences don’t have anything to do with quality of work).