I will read and give notes on your first chapter. I will try to critique up to five chapters, but if I find significant errors early on or if I am seeing the same types of errors throughout, I will critique less, but I will read and critique at least one chapter.
Reading-wise, I prefer scifi/fantasy and love Harry Potter. I will critique most stories, but am not a fan of straight romance (i.e. romance is fine as a subplot, but more should be happening than the characters falling for each other). If romance is included, my preference is for mxf, but I am open to reading mxm or fxf, but I may not have as much to offer in a critique due to inexperience in these areas (especially mxm). Also keep in mind that if the request is for fan fiction, if I am not familiar with the fandom, this could be an issue–that said, what I can do is give feedback on how to make it more open to those who are not familiar.
Payment: Please read and comment on one of the following chapters below, tagging it #1Critique, so I know to critique your story (if you have a particular story or chapter you want critiqued, post in here or send me a private message). Keep in mind that these are not necessarily the first chapter of the book in question, but rather the next chapter in that particular book that needs opinions. You are only required to comment on one.
If you choose the third sample, you can comment directly on the document or send me a message with your comment. A comment directly in the document is easiest for me, though I am willing to accept either.
Lastly, just be patient. I will post the queue, so that you know when you are on the list to be critiqued. I will likely not be able to critique more than one book per day, so as I said, be patient. I may be on wattpad a lot, but I do have other projects I work on as well.
And that’s it–I look forward to reading all your stories!