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#41

Do you mean Eagle Feather?


#42

Yes, I’m sorry, it’s very late here and I haven’t slept. My apologies.


#43

Thanks!


#44

No problem, I’ll get your review done as soon as possible.


#45

@the-kingofnewyork Hi, your review is complete! I hope that it was helpful.


#46

Title: Dreamt
Author: @lily1066xc
Genre: Teen Fiction
Chapter Number: 1
Short Summary: Elise Silva exists only in the shadow of her twin Jeremy. The lack of attention she receives in reality causes her to find solace only when she dreams where she is always with Jay. However, the day she (literally) runs into Luke is the day Jay disappears from her dreams. While Luke urges her to enjoy reality, Elise still struggles to let go of the one she created in her dreams.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/651699227-dreamt-chapter-one


#47

thank you sm, i appreciate it! :slight_smile:


#48

@lily1066xc Accepted, please complete payment.


#49

Title: Train Ride
Author: me, @shadowsettle
Genre: Romance (LGBT+), short story (one chapter)
Short summary:

Alex just wanted to get to her university from her dirty flat (she was broke), not fall in love at first sight and then have it taken away in a moment.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/144097477-train-ride-short-story

If you accept, thank you so much! If not, well then okay.


#50

@shadowsettle Accepted, please complete payment.


#51

Thank you! :slight_smile:


#52

I completed the payment!


#53

Perfect, I’ll start your review as soon as possible.


#54

Bump (will try to get to all pending ones tonight)


#55

Payment done. Please tell me if I did it wrong.


#56

@shadowsettle No, you’ve done it right. I’ll get your review done as soon as possible.


#57

Hi, your critique is complete. I hope that it was useful!


#58

Hi, your review is complete. I hope that it was helpful.


#59

It was! Thank you so much for your feedback and help :slight_smile:


#60

This is greatly appreciated Destiny. I would love someone to look over my prologue for My Star Wars book. Any help would be very, VERY much appreciated. Thx!
Title: Star Wars - Knights of The Old Republic - Betrayal
Chapter Number: Prologue
Author: Me @ElizaErson
Genre: Sci-Fi / Fan-Fic
Short Summary: A Jedi framed for a crime he did not commit.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/167421269-star-wars-knights-of-the-old-republic-betrayal?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks