[Open] In Line Comments + Critique (UPDATED POST)

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#22

Hey, I have completed the payment.
Hope it helps you

Thank you


#23

Payment completed. I have read all the three parts of your story :slight_smile:


#24

Title: Blood Dolls
Genre: Vampire, werewolf, mature
What Type of Feedback?: story, not grammar i know it’s not grammar perf, read for a read is fine too
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/43800630-blood-dolls-prequel-to-blue-bloods


#25

yes please notify me once done. please also send a link which story and chapter would you want me to read on and leave a feedback/critique. thanks


#26

Hi. Story accepted.
Please let me know once youre done with my story so I can pay you right away
:slight_smile:


#27

finito!


#28

I have completed the payment. I’m interested in reading more. I’m hooked.


#29

Hey, done reading btw.
P.S. (screaming like a banshee here!) Please continue writing your story. I’m already your biggest fan!! No exaggerations intent here.


#31

Bump :blush::memo:


#32

I’ve only just started mine so it’s got 3 chapters haha, I would love to do a read for read and not too focused on critiquing atm but I would still love to know your thoughts on the story line and if you like it. Thank you!
TITLE: Amnesia
GENRE: Romance/mystery
LINK: https://www.wattpad.com/story/180659848-amnesia


#33

Title: Phasma
Genre: Fantasy
Type of feedback: Critique (no sugar) for the story, never mind the grammar
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/104949053-phasma


#34

Hi there @ queen_sixhei, story accepted
Please let me know once youre done with my story so I can pay you right away :slight_smile:


#35

hello there! id love to give critiques :slight_smile:
story accepted
please let me know once youre done with my story so I can pay you right away


#36

:cat: Bump


#37

Title: Balance is key
Author: @llllllllllok
Genre: Fantasy
Status: Ongoing
Chapters: 3
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/179690154-balance-is-key

"In order to leave you need to fulfil certain requirements concerning your mind. You need to have accepted death, accepted the fact that we all eventually wither away and crumble to dust. You need to be able to stare down a blade, void of fear. "

Magical epic battles laced with philosophy, psychology and weird humor. Will occasionally contain a lot of gore & violence. Set in the middle ages.

Comments & constructive criticism greatly appreciated!
I do r4r & c4c.

You can give comments/a review of your choice, I’d like to read all 3 of your chapters


#38

hi :slight_smile: story accepted
please let me know once youre done so i can start paying right away


#39

Title: Ivory Black

Genre Teen Fiction

What Type of Feedback ? Both

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/637431408-ivory-black-01


#40

hey Writerthoughtss
I noticed your genre is teen fiction. Im not sure if you’re into dark novel/r15, so if youd like, you may check out my other thread (see below link) but if youd like to continue on my story posted here, then you may only do read-for-read for prologue and chapter 1. saw your story and it only has two parts

https://www.wattpadwriters.com/t/in-line-comments-open/73269/11


#41

Title: Dreams Far Gone
Genre: YA / Drama
What Type of Feedback?: Both (Grammar / Story)
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/180765712-dreams-far-gone

Do appreciate it! I’m just starting out with 2 parts so far, but idm reading all your 3 .:thinking:


#42

Yay :slight_smile:
Story accepted.
please do notify me once youre done so I can start with your story right away
(my chapters are lenghty :persevere:)