[Open] In Line Comments + Critique (UPDATED POST)



Clear! Published my critique.


done :slight_smile: read up to chapter two
please critique on the story :slight_smile:
never mind the grammar


Heyy @carikitty
I’ve just uploaded the first chapter of my book. I do appreciate honest feedback and responses and hope to do the same in return. I’m still sorting out a few plot ideas etc. but let me know what you think.

Title: Miss Nobody
Genre: Teen fiction/romance/drama/high school
Type of feedback: As above
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/180839996


thanks and done as well :slight_smile:


thank you also for the feedback :slight_smile:


don’t be afraid to give honest criticism! i promise i can handle it haha


Hey! I’m looking for a read for read, I would actually prefer a feedback but I’m not good at critiquing so, I’ll just let that be for a while.
Story Title: The Bad Boy Says I’m Crazy NOT A HIGH SCHOOL ROMANCE
Genre: Young Adult
With four chapters, you may not exactly dive into the plot, but I’d like whatever I can get. Please start from prologue and not from cast and summary.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/156088815-the-bad-boy-says-i’m-crazy


Novel Title: Memoirs of a Goddess Prequel to the Shadow Spaces
Genre: Romance Fantasy
Type of Feedback preferred: Story only since my novel has already been looked over by my editor.
I’m happy to take a look at all three of your chapters since I’ve posted four of my own. Thanks!


Hi there. Story accepted :slight_smile:
Please let me know once youre done so I can pay you back right away


Sure ill do that! :slight_smile:
Please let me know once youre done so I can pay you right away.


Story accepted
and yes thats noted. please let me know once youre done so i can you pay as soon as i can :slight_smile:


hey there.
story accepted :slight_smile:
please let me know once youre done so i pay your 4 chapters back :slight_smile:


Payment complete. I’ve read from the prologue of Torn all the way through chapter 2. Great job overall with the suspense and detailing on your novel! I like it a lot.


title: agony
genre: fan fiction
type: story
link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/159852262-agony-memori

read for read please :slight_smile:


Hi there. Story accepted, but I have to warn you because my chapters are “lengthy” :persevere:
please let me know if you’re still in


:person_in_lotus_position: bump


Hey! Thanks for the positive reviews. I appreciate it a lot. :heart:


Hey, I have completed your chapters, you’ve got an amazing plot going on. I’d love to read more


Title: Of Sinners & Saints
Genre: Dark Fantasy
Type: Story
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/648773165-of-sinners-saints-book-1-bbc2017-prologue-edited

The minute you check out my story and leave a comment Ill begin yours


Title: Schrodinger’s Child
Genre: Memoir
Type of Feedback: Both
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/179487800-schrodinger’s-child