[Open] In Line Comments + Critique (UPDATED POST)

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#63

i’m in!


#64

Hi, sorry for the late reply.
Story accepted. :slight_smile:
please let me know once you’re done with my story.


#65

Hi can i request you read a different story of mine?
Title: Jericho
Type of feedback: story
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/181439802-jericho

It’s only 2 really short chapters so far. Hope you get a chance to look at it!


#66

Hi. Sure :slight_smile: just let me know once youre done with my story


#67

Im done already with your chapters 1, 2 and 3. I’ll start with your chap4. Just let me know once you’re done with my story


#68

done!


#69

I forgot I had asked for this. I will get to this asap


#70

Title: The Path to You
Genre: YA/ General Fiction
What Type of Feedback?: Overall story
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/179430090-the-path-to-you

Would love in line critiques!! you can also focus on the numbered chapters as the six u read instead of the mark and carter chapters! Thanks so much!


#71

The payment is completed. If you could read chapters 9 through fifteen, since I read 7 of yours, that would be good


#72

Title: Ethan, Espressos, and the End of Days
Genre: Romance and Humor
What Type of Feedback?: Both
Link: Title:
Genre:
What Type of Feedback?: (Grammar, story, or both)
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/707272037-ethan-espressos-and-the-end-of-days-memory-lane

I only have one chapter. :slight_smile:


#73

Hi. Story accepted.
Please let me know once youre done with my story :slight_smile:


#74

Hi. story accepted :slight_smile:
you can read/comment on my prologue as a payment.
no need to go to chapters (its quite lengthy xD)


#75

Finished!


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