7/10 Fascinating, I like the concept. However, the only criticism I have for you is that there are too many minor details (i.e. numbers and specific terms) and not enough suspense added. It seems interesting, but I don’t feel quite compelled to read it just yet. Good blurb though, and I love the plot!
“Don’t fight back. Submit, and they’ll lead you right to the escape.”
Athene Midori seemed to be the perfect child. Multilingual. Intelligent. Beautiful. Mannered. Sure, she did bad things, but she knew how to hide her sins. Her father, however, did not, and Athene had to pay the price for his mistakes.
Falling into a world unlike anything she had ever imagined; a place where kidnapping, prostitution, slavery, violence and murder were seen as normal; Athene must use her charm and intelligence to escape the terrifying reality of her life, and escape the man determined to shape her into his perfect killer.
And when the opportunity to leave and expose the entire organisation presents itself, will she take it? Knowing that if she stays she has the power to save countless more lives?