Put forward your first chapter! (OPEN: LIST REFRESHED)

This alien will read the first chapter of your masterpiece!

  • Just as the title says, I will read the first chapter of your story and leave my thoughts on it

  • Please be patient, I am a nice alien and I will fulfill my part.

Genres that I will ‘not’ read:

  1. Erotica
  2. Romance (straight/lgbt)
  3. Real person fanfic




A permanent follow. I’ll appreciate if you have a look at my work, but that’s not necessary!

Have an amazing day!


Sapphire Envy by Mien Sarah (completed)
Vega of the Sky by Samantha Axel (completed)
The City On The Edge’ by Stephanie Fern (Completed)

Title: Aneurin
Genre: Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/614385289-aneurin-~-wattys-2019-chapter-one
Username: AliceBarnes
Payment: Followed :heart:

Your poetry collection ‘Melancholy’ looks particularly interesting, so in addition to the payment of following you, I will also have a look at your book. I hope you enjoy the first chapter of ‘Aneurin’, just in case you would like a little more info on the book, here is the blurb:

Never trust a fae.
Never give them your name.
Never fall for their tricks.
Three simple rules that Enid should have followed, three simple rules that she forgot.

A remote Welsh mountain village surrounded by deep forest is under the control of the Fae and plagued with fear. Unlike Fairies, Fae are dark creatures that lure young children away into the forest, never to be seen again. When the people of Aethelney begin to cut down the forest and hunt the animals within it, the Fae take it into their own hands to prevent it.

The children of Aethelney are taught one thing; never give a Fae your name. For a name holds more power than one could possibly imagine. At the age of just six years old, Enid first encounters a Fae; Aneurin. Enid was warned to never go near the Fae ring, but when she does she cannot be held accountable for what follows.

Thank you ahead of for taking the time to read and leave feedback on the first chapter, it is much appreciated!

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Title: The Protetturi: The Beginning of the End
Genre: Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/754249484-the-protetturi-the-beginning-of-the-end-chapter
Username: CoralScholes_

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Thank you so much!

And I will start reading yours very soon :slight_smile:

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I’ll do my part very soon :slight_smile:

Title/Link: Isaiah’s Story
Genre: Paranormal Horror/Adventure
Username: @SethAMott

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Title: Slate
Genre: Teen Fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/159718323-slate-✔
Username: Seaofgreen

Thank you so much! I’ll definitely take a look at your story :slight_smile:

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Hey, I’d love it if you could take a look at my first chapter :blush:

Title: A Pocket Full of Posies
Genre: YA Paranormal
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/178512469-a-pocket-full-of-posies
Username: Dear_Rhian

Thanks so much, you’re a star! I’ll go ahead and give you a follow, and because I’m nosy, probably check out some of your writing too.

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Thanks so much!!

Thank you!!!

@Dear_Rhian @seaofgreen @SethAMott I’ll check your writing soon :slight_smile:

Hi! If you’re still open, I’d really appreciate it if you could look at my short story. It’s only on chapter long!

Title: The Prophet who Lives in Seventrees (in the anthology There, Through Old Lands)
Genre: Horror/dark fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/780010463-there-through-old-lands-a-collection-of-short
Username: ferret-bird

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Thanks <3 Love the community

Title: Crimson Reprisal
Genre: High Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/776493201-crimson-reprisal-i-bloodcrawler
Username: @MoltenHeat

Here’s mine!

Name: The Last Woman on Earth
Blurb: Long ago, there was a type of human existed in this world, and they were called ‘women’. Our generation will never know what happened. None of the remaining public documents mention why ‘women’ have gone extinct, and it seems the people of later generations have done so deliberately. And I found a so-called last of their kind.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/85944317-the-last-woman-on-earth

Hope you enjoy it!

@DanielNgo5 @MoltenHeat @Ferret-bird I’ll check your works out!

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Genre: Fantasy
Username: @AmethystMoonshine
Description (it’s not listed but I see someone else put one): The sun and the moon never stop moving across the sky. Day and night, Cynthia and Lilly follow the same. Moving has become a strain on these two sisters. It has always been a strain. But they can’t stop. Not while the regime is in power. No, they will keep running and hiding, the way Cynthia’s mother taught her many years ago. When their mother had left they were just children, Lilly was just an infant. This life is all they know.

As they begin to think themselves accustomed to the road, a fork appears. During an average move they find a man running from patrols. He is brought back to the camp, only to give Cynthia something she couldn’t have expected-a note from her mother.

The sun rises again.

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The Elestial Stylus

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Title: The Imprecation of the Temples
Genre: Adventure/Thriller
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/198173481-the-imprecation-of-the-temples
Username: ahmedjama9

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@AhmedJama9 @StuartTown @AmethystMoonshine I’ll have a look at yours :slight_smile:

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Thank you thank you! Following now :innocent:

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