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#22

done!


#23

open slots!


#24

Title: The Money Grubber 2
Genre: Adventure
Summary: Asato woke up in an unfamiliar place and had to do what people say to survive. But he doesn’t care about it since he only wants to see his family.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/148166855-the-money-grubber-2
Did you complete payment? Done on Fascination Street
How would you like your critique? (PM, here, on story) Story please

Thank you! :smile:


#25

Title: Wing[wo]man
Genre: Humor, Romance
Summary: Prisana Visalyaputra is that one girl that all the boys accept as another “male” friend and is the ultimate wing woman to her group of friends. She has no intention of getting in a serious relationship. Then there’s Bates, a man who is looking for a serious relationship and preferably, a suitable marriage partner. Both of them are looking for very different things. There’s absolutely no way these two would associate unless of course the prospect of hiring a wing woman is involved. A thrilling and unexpected romance awaits in a humorous tale of love and coping with the changes that come along with it.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/110540223-wing-wo-man
Did you complete payment?: Doing now. Should complete soon
How would you like your critique? (PM, here, on story) PM or story is fine


#26

Title: The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Genre: Fantasy, Epic Fantasy, High Fantasy
Summary: Sahara is a young woman living in the kingdom of Dasos, a ward to the royal family and foster sister to the young prince Nashoba. Found in the woods with her grandmother years ago, she is shunned by others for her poor origin, scarlet red hair, and a scar that most believe to be a consequence of witchcraft. While she longs to forgo the loneliness that never seems to leave her heart, she is resigned to live out the rest of her life in unhappiness and solitude. However, when Nashoba is abruptly kidnapped by shadow-like creatures and a mysterious branded woman, she throws aside her fears in a momentousness decision to follow her brother’s abductors. Suddenly thrust into an enchanting and spectacular world, Sahara must overcome her own insecurities and trust in herself and others to save her brother from a horrendous fate.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/659085416-the-legend-of-the-moonflower-princess-where-the
Did you complete payment? not yet
How would you like your critique? (PM, here, on story) On the story would be great!

Word of warning, my chapters are fairly long. I have received feedback on it, but I hope you don’t give up after the first chapter. I hope you enjoy my book!


#27

@Lorena_Slowaki @BeauQueen @jgrace2197
Gotcha all down! I’ll hopefully get to your critiques within the week!


#28

Title: Shadows in the Trees
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: A thousand years ago, a powerful Fae witch created the cursed White Forest to protect the Sylph and Fae from slaughter at the hands of humans led by the prophet Malachi. Now, the forest unites several characters as their stories intertwine, and ultimately lead them on a quest to save their world as they know it.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164178657-shadows-in-the-trees
Did you complete payment? yes, the prologue of espionage
How would you like your critique? (PM, here, on story) on story, please


#29

gotcha, thank you!


#30

Thank you!