Hello, I am preparing to send a query letter to a few agents and I really need your help. English isn’t my first language and I would like to know what must be added or edited to grab their attention. Much Thanks in advance.
“Fear of the Unknown” is a completed 16,000 words mystery-drama set in a fictional town Canzos.
The book opens with the main character promising his friends to come back when he grows into an adult. Standing on his words, he decides to visit them before getting married to his girlfriend, Jasmine. While most people could be happy with a friend getting engaged, his friends shifted in their place. Jasmine gets murdered by an anonymous and things begin to get complcated. With every chapter one of his friends dies scaring him.
Though he planned to run away saving his life he couldn’t leave the only friend who was saved by the nick of time. Who is that unknown person behind the muders? How did everything begin? Can he save his life or will he die like his friends? Tangled in between unwanted mess, his life is a roller coaster ride.
I am currently working on another thriller and this is my first novel. I enclose the first three chapters and a synopsis. I hope you like what you see and look forward to hearing from you.