9/10 I’ve seen the evil mate trope before, but never with a MC tending to the evil side, too. I would be interested in reading if it was done right. Original and intriguing, so well done. Two minor things – I would suggest you use words for numbers (eg. twenty instead of 20) for a more polished feel, and I did find the commas after the word ‘but’ interrupted the flow a little.
Unhappily Ever After
Rhodric Llewellyn is the grandson of a rogue folk hero. When he arrives in Snowdonia, he becomes a rallying point for the dregs of the shifter community, some of whom happen to be amongst the kindest, bravest people ever born. The packs want all of them dead, but they aren’t afraid to fight back.
Rhodric will have to face seven bloodthirsty Alphas, the soulmate he wasn’t supposed to have, and a human who will go to extraordinary lengths to kill him. But no matter what he does, his time in Snowdonia can only end one way - bloody. Because the higher you climb, the further you have to fall.
(I’m particularly looking for any parts which are poorly worded or don’t flow, please)