I personally would really enjoy reading this story, with her involved. I love the attitude and personality you’ve given her and the dynamics with struggling to accept her sexuality and witnessing that trauma but not letting it stop her. I love her name, but her description is a little cliché… still decent enough since it’s rather realistic for some considering her age and you’ve added in some extras so she isn’t too perfect. I’ve also heard of the parents dying so many times it’s a little done to death, or friends dying during schooling, it’s not bad, might have cost a number though. Overall, I think you’ve created a character with an enjoyable personality that ties into herself. Perhaps some further details could be added but I understand if this medium is restrictive. I will give you a point on giving hr a good childhood though Really just expand natural on what you have and you’ll be alright.
Character Name Armis Lomares.
Nicknames? None, aside from ‘kid’ and other usual names from adults.
Age 20 Human Years
Appearance 5’ 7’’ Has long, dark, greasy black hair lined with blond roots(dyes his hair black) Hangs in curtains since he rarely washes it. Freckles on his neck, tanned slightly from sunburns. Has a slim complexion with dimples, full cheeks and thin eyebrows. He’s an alright looking guy, just doesn’t take care of himself. Slightly underweight with less muscular density than average for his age, below average height. Very intelligent.
Place of Residence Division 4. Democratic Republic of Iravan. Lives in Crefta Province (A fictional state, this is fantasy )
How do they dress? She wears a thin cloth suit underneath usually a plain T-shirt and jeans. Typically a white shirt. Often wears black runners, but wears a ring on his right hand, a pendant on his neck. Sometimes wears political shirts and jackets, even a cloak. Favours the casual look.
Dress to Impress or appropriately? When it comes to him and his girlfriend meeting for dates, dress to impress, but otherwise he couldn’t care less.
Major Life Experiences Commanded an army through an invasion on their homeland. Travelled the entire world on foot and train. Conned various dangerous mercenaries out of large sums. Set up a failing business. Most of this is spoilers, but who cares, hehe. Finally, one more is hiking up a mountain, in freezing cold weather. dying too but that doesn’t count
Traumatic Experiences? Witnessed his homeland burn to the ground and his siblings be killed. Witnessed his girlfriend die protecting him. Manipulated by someone he could trust, betrayal by just about everyone he knows.
Childhood Quality? Good or Bad? Mostly a good childhood. Some mental abuse, but he went his own way and is now kinda alive.
Obsessions/hobbies Absolutely LOVES dogs, hopes to become a veterinarian if his business fails. Swimming, recreational hunting (small game) mildly interested in engineering. Has no obsessions as he lives by moderation. Community service too.
Medical Conditions/Mental Health Has undiagnosed ‘High-Functioning Autism’ causing anxiety and low self-esteem in bursts.
Additional Information He’s been an outcast his entire life, so Armis has learned to survive alone. He’s a survivalist and expert con, able to trick even those that are looking for underhanded moves. Harbours a hatred towards werewolves and lies to conceal it, easily becomes insecure but rarely aggressive. He’s the ‘disappointing middle child’ of his family, mainly for his unwillingness to join the army or enter into arms manufacturing or scientific fields. He’s an economic genius and can analyse a country’s financial stability in a few hours alone. His friends mean everything to him, hates being lied to and betrayed, for some reason is a good leader despite functioning alone.