I like where you were going with it, it sounds like a romance that shouldn’t happen, but is too irresistible to not try once. I love those kinds of romances. I did think it was a bit of a mouthful to say though, but frankly, I don’t see how that really matters. It’s a superficial judgement, because I know a lot of thought and time goes into picking a title for your book, and I don’t think it’s possible to really know how 'valuable" or “good” a title is, unless you understand the true meaning of the story. I mean, if Stephen King posted on here his title name “Carrie”, I’d give it a 3, because it’s unoriginal, not knowing that it was one of his best known works of all time, regardless of the title. So Unlawful Temptations, I applaud you. Great job!
My title is Grey.